kalamazoo s

What is the color of mourning?
of empty spaces, and Where?
black, but it has no reply.
just questions and sorrow.
will remain unfilled,
killed.  More shots from another gun.

Another echo poem.

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25 responses to “Questions”

  1. Jodi says :

    great job on this one! Such a powerful message in words and art. You are such a deep thinker – I love it! What is life for if not for deep, meaningful thoughts.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Jane Dougherty says :

    Good one. I’m glad you sent it in. I like the double echo effect, in the rhyme and in the repetition of our stupidities.

    Liked by 2 people

  3. Charlie O'Shields (doodlewash) says :

    Wow…sobering message… Powerful words and strong image. Really great work

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Laura (Createarteveryday) says :

    This one is brutal. In the best of ways. Thank you, Kerfe. Your work belongs in museums and would draw amazing crowds. Everything you do….would make quite a symphony. Again, thank you.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. memadtwo says :

    You really are a deep thinker. Loving your poetry.


  6. Sharon Mann says :

    Very moving post.


  7. Teresa Robeson says :

    I agree with you that people have been too silent about the Kalamazoo incident. When are the sane people going to win over the rabid gun-nuts?

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Teresa Robeson says :

    It’s a brilliant poem…so sad and poignant and beautiful. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Michael Richards (certainline) says :

    Very moving poem – the subject never goes away does it? – and a wonderful image.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Lynz Real Cooking says :

    Very powerful words!

    Liked by 1 person

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