Like Stars
And will you gift me with wings
shadow me with Muses
uncontain me
and scatter me like stars
Will you baptize me with liquid air
cobalt, glittering and breathless
will you wander me into your journey
will you expand me
soaring me inside concentric orbits
will you call me to the universe
in a shower of iridescent vibration
will you gift me with wings?
Another inspiring painting from Jane Dougherty, and the words
Star, gift, wander, soaring, cobalt
as a prompt.
I know, wings again. I’m sure Jung would have something to say about it. Just making art from what I’m seeing…
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This is an incredible piece. Just love the depth that the background gives and the other-worldly feel. And I do believe we are both out in space today! One of my favorites Kerfe. I wish I had more time to really study it. I may have missed the size? Would be curious.
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I saw this blue paper in my local art store and had to buy a sheet…it’s an amazing color I think. It’s big, 18 x 24. I decided to use the entire sheet, not cut it.
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Boy it’s gorgeous. I’m glad you used the whole sheet.
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I love love love this. Amazed to have read 3 poems now in response to the same prompt and loved each one. The other’s I have read so far are Janice’s and Merril’s. ‘Uncontain me and scatter me like stars’ wow.
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Thanks! It’s a great prompt. Jane really inspires good work I think.
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Ye, she does!
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really liked the way you use questions to create the verses – I was left with a mystical feeling…
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What a wonderful complement, thanks. I am full of questions, it seems.
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Yes, mystical.
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Thanks.
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Mystical and inspired. Wings are wonderful 🙂
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Thanks…I can’t seem to get away from them!
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Every day I want to say “THIS is my favorite” and every day it is! Again can’t decide on whether it is the art or words that draw me more – they are both so extraordinary. The words help give meaning – DEEP, thoughtful meaning. Your gift is growing to new heights. I’m thinking you may need to publish your works K!! Beautiful!
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Jodi, you are making me blush again. Thanks so much for your continued support!
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Enchanting and captivating …
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Thanks, Cynthia.
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Once again, thanks.
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Great work and the cobalt makes it spark!
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It’s a beautiful color, thanks!
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This is mysterious, mesmerizing and gorgeous!
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Thanks Lynn. The universe is mysterious!
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It really is!
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Beautiful, lyrical, poem and stunning collage. Really stunning. I love this poetry and art so much!
Will you baptize me with liquid air
cobalt, glittering and breathless–makes me a bit breathless, too.
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Thanks Merril. This prompt really struck a chord with me.
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It’s wonderful when that happens.
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It is. Rare, and always appreciated.
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Gorgeous! “Will you gift me with wings”…exactly how I feel looking at your incredible collage. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks! I do seem to be stuck on wings. They make good subjects for art and poetry.
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Yay a horse, lol…I love your words, each part so justified
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Thanks Rebecca. Horses are always evocative!
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This poem gave me chills! And yeah Jung would probably be all over my symbolism; I just have fun with art too. 🙂
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Thanks Sunshine. Every once in awhile, a poem just happens…
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Thanks for the reblog!
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