Mother of Winds

mother of winds close up s

I look to the sky for the mother of winds–
asking her why, my mother of winds.

Her chariot crosses ahead of the sun–
with you I would fly, O mother of winds.

Like you I would step from the sea born anew–
black waves choke me dry, my mother of winds.

Pledged to a journey of transforming light–
dark ravens comes crying, my mother of winds.

I married the magic expecting to merge–
false troth bound to dying, O mother of winds.

And where are the children to circle me round?
aborted by lying, cruel mother of winds.

I curse and she answers with silence and ice–
the knots are untying me, mother of winds.


Jane Dougherty’s challenge this week was inspired by the painting of Dawn, above, and asked us to use the ghazal form:  a series of two-line verses of the same length, with a somewhat complex rhyming scheme, both internal and line-ending.  To complicate things, not everyone agrees exactly on the rules.  Two very different explanations and examples of ghazal are here and here.

mother of winds s

Dawn has many mythological sides and I incorporated some of them into my poem.  Not only is she the mother of winds, some say she birthed the planets too.


Tags: , , ,

About memadtwo

For more madness, follow me on Instagram @h_zimel methodtwomadness is a blog of two friends, Nina and Kerfe kblog is Kerfe's solo branch on the tree

31 responses to “Mother of Winds”

  1. merrildsmith says :

    It is a tricky form. I like your “Mother of winds” refrain, and your collage, too. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Jane Dougherty says :

    It is a complicated form and I like the way you change the refrain part according to the sense of the preceding line. Merril did the same and I think the poem is stronger for it.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. kirkistan says :

    Wow, Kerfe! Your collage and poem are deeply emotive for me. I’m trying to pick out the pieces that touch me. Your word/image combination has got me thinking.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. rivrvlogr says :

    Any form has variations. Yours add depth to the plea in your poem. A Kerzal.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. memadtwo says :

    I love when you add those circles to the collages. I’m thinking you almost have enough of these for a small book. Think about it…N.


  6. Sunshine Jansen says :

    Excellent poem, and interesting that before I even knew the form was ghazal I thought “This should be set to music.” I was thinking more old English folk at first and then wondered what it might sound like in the ghazal devotional style (a la Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan or Abida Parveen).

    Liked by 1 person

    • memadtwo says :

      That’s something to think about. It was definitely influenced by all those old ballads. I don’t know that much about middle eastern music though, except for the occasional listening.

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Lynz Real Cooking says :

    Wow so gorgeous in every wat

    Liked by 1 person

  8. artandmoondreams says :

    Wonderful duet. Love the mystery and storytelling behind the poem and the collage. Apart or together they are a delight.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Jodi says :

    Oh Kerfe …. mother of poetry…. mother of art… mother of mystery… mother of truth… mother of beauty

    Liked by 1 person

  10. M.R. Emberson says :

    Kerfe, I really enjoyed this, especially the “dark ravens” and the paradoxical “the knots are untying me.”

    Liked by 1 person

  11. pranabaxom says :

    Such a lovely poem. Love the collage.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. reocochran says :

    I like knowing how you did this. Also, how the winds mythology goes, I learned something here. Smiles, Robin

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: