Light Shift Anew


air misted with light
transparent, a shift
blurred softly, anew

silences weep, anew
cloudbursts reveal light
displaced as words shift,

as disguises shift,
multiplied anew
transitions of light–

light weightless shift expanding tears overflow anew


Jane Dougherty’s challenge this week was a tritina poem, with the painting above, and the word “parting”.


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28 responses to “Light Shift Anew”

  1. Steve says :

    Pleasant colors…… Very beautiful…..


  2. Jane Dougherty says :

    I like this. It’s airy, sort of patters along like light rain. Could I make a suggestion? When I read it I kept reading ‘anew’ instead of ‘new’. It seemed to sound better. What do you think? Is it just my obsession with rhythm?

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  3. Jodi says :

    Beautifully done k!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Sand Salt Moon says :

    Oh, I like how you integrated the painting into your artwork and the poetry. Lovely imagery in words and with the painted and sew piece. Bravo!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Charlie O'Shields (doodlewash) says :

    This is so beautiful! Love this one!!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Lynz Real Cooking says :

    I love the colors! so soft and peaceful!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. davekingsbury says :

    Your picture is a nice abstract version of the other …

    Liked by 1 person

  8. merrildsmith says :

    Lovely. I like the mistiness of the words and painting.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. sarahsouthwest says :

    That’s just lovely.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Janice says :

    Beautiful poem and companion art.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. sheldonk2014 says :

    Simply beautiful
    Words and art work
    Just stopped to say hello
    As always Sheldon


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