Postcard Fiction: Tomorrow Never Knows
we’re swimming in air
we breathe the stars shine
the waves send time deep
the moment faces the sea
tomorrow is eternal
Jane Dougherty’s Sunday challenge, below, inspired the usual shifting world. The tanka formed quickly from my word box.
Should we believe in yesterday? or tomorrow?
18 responses to “Postcard Fiction: Tomorrow Never Knows”
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What a gorgeous collage and poem combination! Your women look so much more dynamic than the poor Greek girls. At a guess I’d say they are about to burst into tomorrow with all guns blazing.
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Thanks Jane…your images always strike a chord.
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They certainly produce some beautiful work 🙂
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wow! this should be on exhibit!
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Thanks Jodi! maybe someday…
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YES!
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Wow–wonderful, Kerfe!
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Thanks Merril…Jane’s images are so evocative.
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You are so good at this.
Believe in yesterday, including the corrections of today, hoping they will be surpassed tomorrow.
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Well put. Yes, let’s hope.
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Beautiful–my favorite line is “the moment faces the sea.” It could spark off a poem of its own.
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Thanks Jennifer…and go for it!
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Love collages and the pastiche of the painting is ace …
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Thanks Dave…I think of them as commentaries. Jane always provides good art to work with.
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Wonderful!
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Thanks Lynn!
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I’m so happy with the result!
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