Morning Stars
Today’s Oracle continues on the theme from yesterday. Colleen’s poetry challenge this week included words (hard, soft) I was sure would be in its magnetic word selection, and I was correct. A tanka from the Oracle, with dots. And as a bonus: the alliteration follows the NaPoWriMo prompt.
when darkness lingers
hard as haunted voices hole
in sad broken nights
the soft breath of morning stars
melts the fever with dancing
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- - April 18, 2017
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Yours and mine combine well today 🙂
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They do!
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Beautiful poem, and I like your word dots. Well-done in doing three prompts, too! 🙂
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The alliteration was by accident–but I think I tend to do it a lot naturally.
Those news stories do darken my nights…
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so lovely – and the amazing different creative things you are doing with the circles!!
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Thanks Jodi! The circle is a good shape to work with I think.
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Those last two lines especially, and I like your pearly morning-star circles, too!
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Thanks Jennifer. I always go back to the stars!
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Love your circles and your “soft breath of morning stars” – a lovely image! ✨☀️
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Thanks Jill!
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‘the soft breath of morning stars’ Lovely! Only the fridge oracle seems to provide this kind of imagery 🙂
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Thanks Jane. That is so true. It definitely brings out a poetic side to me that isn’t normally available.
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It’s because the oracle takes your hand and pulls out the right words 🙂
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I see/feel the darkness transforming, lifting and floating away into brighter skies. Wonderfully creative collage expressing your poetic words, Nina. ❤
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This is Kerfe, but thanks. We have tags as to who each post belongs to, but I’m not sure it shows all the time.
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Now I see the tag. Sorry! Anyways, I loved your collage, Kerfe.
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Thanks!
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Love this
Hole in the sad broken nights
What an image
As Sheldon Always
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Thanks Sheldon.
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