Morning Stars

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Today’s Oracle continues on the theme from yesterday.  Colleen’s poetry challenge this week included words (hard, soft) I was sure would be in its magnetic word selection, and I was correct.  A tanka from the Oracle, with dots.  And as a bonus:  the alliteration follows the NaPoWriMo prompt.

when darkness lingers
hard as haunted voices     hole
in sad broken nights

the soft breath of morning stars
melts the fever with dancing


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20 responses to “Morning Stars”

  1. Angela van Son says :

    Yours and mine combine well today 🙂

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  2. merrildsmith says :

    Beautiful poem, and I like your word dots. Well-done in doing three prompts, too! 🙂

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  3. Jodi says :

    so lovely – and the amazing different creative things you are doing with the circles!!

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  4. Jennifer G. Knoblock says :

    Those last two lines especially, and I like your pearly morning-star circles, too!

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  5. Jill Kuhn says :

    Love your circles and your “soft breath of morning stars” – a lovely image! ✨☀️

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  6. Jane Dougherty says :

    ‘the soft breath of morning stars’ Lovely! Only the fridge oracle seems to provide this kind of imagery 🙂

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  7. Olga says :

    I see/feel the darkness transforming, lifting and floating away into brighter skies. Wonderfully creative collage expressing your poetic words, Nina. ❤

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  8. sheldonk2014 says :

    Love this
    Hole in the sad broken nights
    What an image
    As Sheldon Always

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