derelict

derelict s

abandoned to the naked air
the fabric of a life—threadbare–
the walls surrendered all around

the atmosphere is desolate
the inner spirit cast adrift
all hope released without a sound

and who will travel to this land
and who will stop–hold out a hand–
inhabit lost to locate found?

For Sue Vincent’s photo prompt this week, above.  The poetic form is nove otto.

derelict stitching s

 

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28 responses to “derelict”

  1. Sue Vincent says :

    I would… given half a chance 🙂

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  2. Carol A. More says :

    WOW! This is a beautiful interpretation of the photo. The colors are fantastic and stitching a delicious and welcomed texture. Nice!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Jennifer G. Knoblock says :

    I just love the sounds in this, and the stitching at the center of the artwork echoes the weaving of sounds in the poem. It feels/looks like a heart stitched back together…

    Liked by 1 person

  4. kestrelart says :

    I do like your interpretations of photos

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Claudia McGill says :

    That last line really speaks to me. Because I think I’ve done that but never put it to myself that way. Just wow.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Jodi says :

    such beautiful powerful words and art! You are such a deep thinker with such a creative spirit! LOVE it!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. davisbrotherlylove says :

    Love the stitching, K!
    j

    Liked by 1 person

  8. merrildsmith says :

    This is magical. I feel like it’s a fairy tale.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. rivrvlogr says :

    I like the direction you took this.

    Liked by 1 person

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