Go Make People Among Rain

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Go make people among rain
gather kin beneath the storm
hold the lost and the forlorn
go make people among rain

Ask the echoes to explain
watch silence being born
go make people among rain
gather kin beneath the storm

Dance the circle round again
dreams enchanted into form

chords of color greet the sun
singing verse into refrain

Go make people among rain

On May 25, Robert Okaji posted his beautiful translation of Wang Wei’s poem “Apricot House”.  He included the Chinese-poems.com transliteration of the original poem, and I was taken by the line from it, “Go make people among rain”.  Robert challenged me to take that line and make my own poem, which I did, based on a slightly altered Rondel form.

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30 responses to “Go Make People Among Rain”

  1. janetweightreed10 says :

    Love words and image….have a great weekend…Janet 🙂

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  2. Leonie Andrews says :

    Beautiful response.

    Liked by 2 people

  3. robert okaji says :

    Reblogged this on O at the Edges and commented:
    Kerfe Roig steps up to the plate. She swings. Going. Going! Yes!

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Jessan Dunn Otis|Writer says :

    Bearing witness to inspiration, conversation, creativity, skill, tender fierceness and elegance. Thank you. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  5. nananoyz says :

    Love it! Absolutely lyrical!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. memadtwo says :

    A totally fabulous piece and I love the poem too. That one deserves to be framed in a nice big box frame. Absolutely gorgeous. And the poem too. You are really doing some great work.

    Liked by 1 person

    • memadtwo says :

      Robert is really an inspiration…I’m glad I could rise to his challenge. I like the idea of combining two different media pieces into one as well.


  7. Jennifer G. Knoblock says :

    Just gorgeous–all of it.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Jodi says :

    absolutely amazing!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. M says :

    magic ~

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Carol A. More says :

    See a bit of a puppy face in this! Love the color bleed. And on a super serious note…this is a beautiful piece. Stunningly beautiful.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. rivrvlogr says :

    “Ask the echoes to explain
    watch silence being born”

    Food for thought.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. sarahrussellpoetry says :

    Wonderful images in this poem, and the line “Go make people among rain” that inspired the poem is just beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. stevetanham says :

    Very beautiful. Thank you.

    Liked by 1 person

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