Autumn Song

black landscape s

Leaves singing the wind–
harmony of sad embrace–
I watch as clouds sigh.

Take this mood and rearrange
the patterns to reflect light.

For Colleen’s poetry challenge, also using the Secret Keeper’s words this week.

With another monoprint.

 

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21 responses to “Autumn Song”

  1. merrildsmith says :

    I love this–poem and art. The singing leaves and sighing clouds–and yes,rearrange to reflect the light.

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  2. alongtheinterstice says :

    there is a splendid contrast in both works, shifting confrontations of colors and mood, at the same time a cooperations of opposites.

    Liked by 3 people

  3. Lynz Real Cooking says :

    The words are perfect and I can feel what they are saying inside of me. The art brings it home

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Lynz Real Cooking says :

    The combination is wonderful

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Jodi says :

    Beautiful! I love the imagery of clouds sighing.

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Olga says :

    Love the feel of movement in your autumn art piece. The last two lines seem to introduce an inner reflection of desiring change to a lighter presence. Interesting! 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  7. Colleen Chesebro says :

    What a great Tanka. I love the idea of us “rearranging” our mood. Excellent message. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Jill Kuhn says :

    The leaves do sound like they are singing in the wind. 🍁🍂 Love the colors in your print! 🎨👍

    Liked by 1 person

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