In a faraway galaxy (a long time ago)

decay 2s

galaxy magnetic

I decided to challenge the Magnetic Oracle with a Rhyme Royal as per the dVerse prompt.  I had no idea where I was going to end up with either words or art.  After my word consultation, I arranged some monoprints in my bin in a few different ways and picked the photo of the one I liked best.  It seems I can’t escape what is going on in the world…

A vast blue rhythm haunted by a star
devoured by living in time’s darkest eye
Our home bleeds fire remembering the air
a foolish ghost with windows made of sky
sailing poisoned breath as oceans cry
we listen to the universe decay
and linger broken dying with each day


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31 responses to “In a faraway galaxy (a long time ago)”

  1. merrildsmith says :

    Wow–the Oracle really does know. This is so sad–poignant perhaps–our poor world.

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  2. alongtheinterstice says :

    troubled times even in rhymes

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  3. rivrvlogr says :

    As much as we’d like to escape, it calls for our attention.

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  4. Frank Hubeny says :

    Nice sound in your poem although the theme is somber. I also liked the collage and the method of trust for constructing these not knowing where it was going to end up.

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  5. Sharon Mann says :

    Your words capture are times perfectly, but your art gives me hope.

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  6. Jill Kuhn says :

    I agree with Sharon – your art always amazes me! ❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says :

    Impressive to do this with magnetic poetry… great work

    Liked by 1 person

  8. davekingsbury says :

    Cosmic poem and I like the way the art seems to escape its bounds!

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  9. Jane Dougherty says :

    Brilliant! It’s so hard to give a poem such a tight form using the magnets. It only works of the oracle wishes it.

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  10. Suzanne says :

    Oh dear – it sounds very depressing! I hope the oracle has some good cheer to spread next time. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Olga says :

    Powerful piece, Kerfe.

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