Into Birds
Seeds turn into trees, eggs hatch into birds–
branches sprout new leaves, merging into birds.
Trees together stand, calling to the birds–
nourishing the land, shelter to the birds.
Roots that anchor deep, filling skies like birds–
winds that secrets keep, sailing songs like birds.
Cells divide and grow, ancestor to birds–
ebbing into flow, speaking time to birds.
Through forests dense and green, dreams scatter me into birds–
though feathers stay unseen, wings open me into birds.
It seems I missed Draw-A-Bird Day yesterday, so I’ve included them in my NaPoWriMo Day 9 post. The prompt was to relate something both large and small, and seeds and trees immediately came to mind. And so, also, birds.
The poem is sort of a ghazal. In the spirit of, anyway.
39 responses to “Into Birds”
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Oh no, was Draw a Bird day yesterday? Augh, I missed it too then! But the imagery of birds in this is really fitting – flight, light, life, and continuing life. Wonderful!
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Thanks! Yes, the days are all merging into one it seems right now…
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They *are*. Oh well, maybe I can still draw a bird, if I can unstick my head form today’s prompt enough to do so!
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Birds are always appropriate!
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An absolutely stunning collage!
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Thanks Michael, I’m pleased with it.
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I like this ghazal or ghazal like form. It seems related to your last few posts–sort of like an incantation that will open a portal–and birds will fly through.
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They all seem to be flowing together somehow. My mind is such mush right now that I couldn’t quite get the explanation for ghazal, but I did like the idea that each couplet can stand on its own. I seem to remember Jane using it for a prompt once too.
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It is kind of complicated, and like many poetry forms, there seem to be variations.
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A chant (or incantation, as Merril says) to greet the first buds of spring.
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I can almost see them…
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oh how fun and enchanting!!
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Thanks Jodi. If we could fly like birds, right?
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I love that moment when the leaves lift off a tree and you realise they were birds! Great response to both prompts and well done on the NaPoWriMo feature!
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Thanks Sarah. They eye and mind can play wonderful games with us. And birds! Always a beautiful mystery.
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Congrats on being featured! And feathered 😉
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Thanks Angela. I can’t seem to shed those feathers….
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Lovely birdlings! How did I miss this one? Congratulations on being the featured poet. Well deserved!
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Thanks Jane. It was a nice surprise this morning!
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I’ll bet 🙂
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I am in awe you have time to create art and poetry!
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Thanks Nina. I’ve actually been working on art for NaPoWriMo for about 6 months. Normally I don’t post every day, which gives me more time for both image and words. But I’m really trying to do all 30 days this year. (K)
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Whoo!… Like those!…
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Thanks Dave!
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Mesmerizing!
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Thanks Betty1
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Well, you know how much I like birds! Your collage is stunningly beautiful and I enjoyed your poem too. I like the comparison of small to large with seeds to trees and eggs to birds. Well done, Kerfe! 🐦💕
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Thanks Jill! Trees and birds seem like natural partners. And any chance to include birds…
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These are GORGEOUS!
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Thanks!
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I love this collage and the poem has the sounds of birds about it ❤
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Thanks Jade. I love that collage too. Sometimes things just come together.
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You’re very welcome. Your work is always a bright spot in my day.
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Thanks Jade. That makes me smile.
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