Autumn (after Joan Mitchell)
I am startled by silence
appearing suddenly, grey, tangled, dense–
all color has fallen away,
hanging by whispers to sharp edges and desolation.
I reach for wind–
carry me to fields where sun
returns blue to sky,
calls trees to green.
The NaPoWriMo prompt for Day 18 was to take lines from a poem (backwards, from last to first) and write a response to each line to make your own poem. Since I have been using the art of Joan Mitchell as inspiration this month, I was pleased to find that she had published a poem, “Autumn”, in Poetry Magazine. You can read it here.
17 responses to “Autumn (after Joan Mitchell)”
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- April 22, 2018 -
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Warmer days will come, I like how you have placed the light orange at the top of your totem…hopefulness.
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I’m sure they will, Sharon, thanks!
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Love the imagery, the incantation! The fallen color hanging by whispers to sharp edges is an amazing image.
By the way, Joan Mitchell was ten years old when she wrote the source poem. I’m just… speechless.
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Thanks!
You know I looked at that date and thought it was strange, but it didn’t really register. Her mother was a poet and worked at Poetry magazine, so I imagine that’s how the connection was made.
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Amazing talent!
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Yes. Amazing woman.
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You have done a wonderful job with this prompt, creating something that is so you and unique at the same time.
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Thanks Merril. This prompt had an affinity for me. I will definitely try it again.
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something so very inviting about this piece of art to me….
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not sure if inviting is the right word, but I’m very drawn to it. It really draws me in and makes me think.
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Thanks Jodi. I was just arranging pieces of paper, and it began to look totem-like and I agree, enigmatic. It could be many things.
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Great use of the Day 18 prompt. I thought that one was fun to play with. 🙂
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Thanks LuAnne. I agree–I will be using it again.
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This was so good. Inspired by the prompt. Well done.
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Thanks. It was a good prompt I think.
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