Congregation
Trees
rimple-
faint curtains
tucked between sky
red roses weathered wood blueming wave song
When looking for synonyms for “gather” for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday prompt, I was immediately drawn to rimple.
I decided to try a Tetractys cinquain.
Off prompt but on time for NaPoWriMo Day 20.
20 responses to “Congregation”
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- - April 23, 2018
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So beautiful!
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Thanks Lynn!
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This is excellent. I love the word rimple. It makes the cinquain! ❤
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Thanks Colleen! The thesaurus is rich with unusual words, and I always enjoy the process of looking for synonyms.
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That is my favorite part too. ❤️
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Rimple! What a wonderful word. It’s like something from an old fairy tale. 🙂
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It is! I hadn’t thought of that. Thanks!
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Rimple! A word to be treasured. I like blueming too 🙂
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Thanks Jane. It is indeed.
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🙂
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Your writing and art is always an enlightenment.
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Thanks Sharon…I’m always grateful for your support!
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Thank you!!!
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I really like the style of this poem.
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Me too. I’m having fun trying all the cinquains out.
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Amazing! In fact, I uploaded a ‘Tetracys’ of my own onto my blog a few days ago. It’s linked below. I’d love it if you would look over it and leave me some tips on how to improve. I’m sure I could learn a lot from you. Hope you like it!
https://poeticaparadisum.wordpress.com/2018/04/28/floating-clouds-tetractys/
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Thanks for visiting. Just keep writing (and reading)! that’s the key.
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