April 20, 2018  

Congregation

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Trees
 rimple-
faint curtains
tucked between sky
red roses weathered wood blueming wave song

When looking for synonyms for “gather” for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday prompt, I was immediately drawn to rimple.

I decided to try a Tetractys cinquain.

Off prompt but on time for NaPoWriMo Day 20.

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20 responses to “Congregation”

  1. Lynz Real Cooking says :

    So beautiful!

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  2. Colleen Chesebro says :

    This is excellent. I love the word rimple. It makes the cinquain! ❤

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  3. merrildsmith says :

    Rimple! What a wonderful word. It’s like something from an old fairy tale. 🙂

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  4. Jane Dougherty says :

    Rimple! A word to be treasured. I like blueming too 🙂

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  5. Sharon Mann says :

    Your writing and art is always an enlightenment.

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  6. robbiesinspiration says :

    I really like the style of this poem.

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  7. Anacrazyfuturewriter says :

    Amazing! In fact, I uploaded a ‘Tetracys’ of my own onto my blog a few days ago. It’s linked below. I’d love it if you would look over it and leave me some tips on how to improve. I’m sure I could learn a lot from you. Hope you like it!
    https://poeticaparadisum.wordpress.com/2018/04/28/floating-clouds-tetractys/

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