offerings
these wells of wishes–
falling up into the air–
held by waves of light
For NaPoWriMo Day 29 and Sue Vincent’s photo prompt above.
Art inspired by Joan Mitchell’s “Grande Vallee”.
23 responses to “offerings”
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- - May 2, 2018
- - May 3, 2018
method two madness 
This is lovely–falling up and held by light! And you are a day ahead!
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Thanks for pointing that out–I corrected it! I’ve written today’s but not posted it yet. Whew! I need a rest…
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🙂
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Art and words. Both wow. The poetry is so visual and made me see the structure so clearly. I think that’s so hard to do, to evoke a strong quick reaction.
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Thanks Claudia. I’ve been working so hard on my poems this month, so many words, it’s easy to forget that sometimes a few words can be just as effective–I’m glad it resonated with you.
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That’s exactly it. I am learning that talking more is not always talking better. I’m trying to be concise and straight to the point anymore. Communication, the must.
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Lovely vibrant abstract art…
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Thanks Evelyn. Joan Mitchell has truly been a great guide this month.
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Love those splashes—I can see birds in there.
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There are always birds.
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That must be significant. In a good way.
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‘waves of light’… yes 🙂
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Thanks Sue. Water in air seems to bring them out.
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Yes… a million prisms casting rainbows….
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A moment of serenity…lovely.
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Thanks Sharon.
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Beautiful đź’śđź’“
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Thank you.
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đź’śđź’ś
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Very nice poem and artwork.
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Thanks Robbie.
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