Noises
Were I Other. Were I spoken in a different voice. Were I fallen into impossibility.
I would be like stars.
I would echo the feeling
that follows the wind.
Were I made of light. Were I pulsing like oceans. Were I to open as wide as never and nothing.
I would radiate
rainbows. I would paint moments
with sound. Fill absence.
For Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday, with synonyms for love and time. I’m not entirely sure this qualifies as a haibun. In the spirit of, anyway.
The embroidered watercolor is a work in progress. I plan to keep embroidering it until I stop.
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beautiful
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Thanks Aletha.
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Love this soooo much!!!!
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Thanks Jodi.
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Awesome and superb poetic splendour dear Memad.
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Thanks for your kind words.
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Welcome
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Oh, this is glorious, Kerfe. Yes, if, all of it.
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Thanks so much Merril.
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The colors. Grid and swirls together. Visual of the poem. Beautiful.
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Thanks Claudia. The circles are indeed swirling me around.
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this is so wonderful, in words and art. Bravo!!
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Do you mind if I reblog this one, it’s so powerful Kerfe?
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Thank you Damien, of course I don’t mind.
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👍🎉🎉
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The words and art blend together…keep on stitching!
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I will, thanks Sharon.
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I’ve read this five times! I love this Haibun. It’s full of light and energy and everything that makes our heart sing. This is one that I must share. ❤
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Thanks for the inspiration and support, as always.
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You bet! I’m thrilled to be part of your world. 😀 ❤
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same from this side
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Reblogged this on Colleen Chesebro ~ The Fairy Whisperer and commented:
Method Two Madness shares a Haibun filled with light and magical energy that I had to share. It spoke to my soul. ❤ Enjoy.
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Thanks so much Colleen.
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You knocked my socks off! 😀
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You have certainly painted the vibrations of the moment with the color of sound. So beautiful, Kerfe. ❤
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Thanks Olga.
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Gorgeous artwork and poetry! ❤
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Thank you!
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Gorgeous artwork! I love it when you add embroidery to anything. Your poem is beautiful too!
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Thanks Betty. Stitching is my meditation.
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I can imagine…. knitting and crocheting are mine.
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Love this!
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Thanks Lynn!
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Most welcome
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #6: Memadtwo’s latest avant-garde #haibun for Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge!
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All beautiful and intriguing.
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Thanks Janice.
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I have been blogging, writing and reading poetry for quite a few years and I can hands down say this is one of the best I have ever read! It is like sound waves reverberating across the internet so we can sense the feeling of the poem and the art wherever we are. Just beautiful.
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What a wonderful complement! Thank you Scott.
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Wow!! So love this, Kerfe! Your mandala is stunning and I like the stitch you chose – does the embroidery stitch have a name or did you make it up? 😃
You poem is lovely too!
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Thanks Jill. No, I was just trying to do triangles. I saw an abstract print with a similar effect and thought it would work in stitching. And it did!
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I will have to give it a try, I really like how it looks!! 😊
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I’m sure you’ll enjoy it!
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There’s something similar in this year’s Royal Academy summer exhibition, interesting approach – https://se.royalacademy.org.uk/2018/artworks/francesca-colussi/257
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Thanks for the link. That’s lovely. I’ve done cross stitch on paper too, but a postcard is a great idea.
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Yes, I found he on instagram and she does lots of work like this!
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LOVE the artwork, Kerfe!
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Thanks Sue! Stitching is my meditation.
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I can understand that 🙂
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Who cares what it says on the label. It’s just plain gorgeous!
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Thanks Jane!
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