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Trespassing, I sleep
in the underneath, reversed,
bedimmed, unlanded

by growth darkened with endings–
upside down, planted in stone.

For Sue Vincent’s photo prompt, above, and Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday words, synonyms for change and defy.

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36 responses to “Revisioning”

  1. Colleen Chesebro says :

    I’ve been watching a series called, Britannia. Your poetry sounds like something the Druid’s would have sent as a message. Mesmerizing words… ❤

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  2. merrildsmith says :

    I love how this poem sounds–beautiful language.

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  3. Suzanne says :

    Your poem seems to echo through the mists of the photo – a voice out of time.

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  4. Sharon Mann says :

    Both words and art are so mysterious.


  5. Charlie O'Shields says :

    I love this one! The painting is fabulous and adore the way those words landed. Really nice!

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  6. Jodi says :

    Oh this painting might be my all time fave!!!!!

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  7. Carol A. More says :

    You nailed those colors! Lovely.

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  8. memadtwo says :

    The closeup of the painting is wonderful in itself. And as a whole perfect with the poetry. N.


  9. Dave Kingsbury says :

    Intriguing with a touch of mystery – just like life, really!

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  10. Sue Vincent says :

    This is superb, Kerfe… and I would love that collage on my wall.

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  11. Lynz Real Cooking says :

    Mysterious and beautiful

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  12. robertawrites235681907 says :

    Two lovely prompts with one poetic stone. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

  13. D. Wallace Peach says :

    I just love seeing what you do with these prompts. Mesmerizing poem and artwork.

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  14. jazzytower says :

    Love this!!



  15. robertawrites235681907 says :

    This is lovely. Well done.

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