The Far Elsewhere

the far elsewhere 2s

Defined by what it is not–
every particle of light
silent, startling.

A journey neither up nor down,
neither here nor there–
defined by what it is not.

Centered in the outer reaches,
jeweled and huge–
every particle of light.

Remaining as day becomes night,
as seasons fall apart and rearrange themselves–
silent, startling.

For Sue Vincent’s photo prompt, above.  The poem is a cascade, a similar form to the pantoum which I have been using so much lately.

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24 responses to “The Far Elsewhere”

  1. merrildsmith says :

    You got me at the title. (Of course. 🙂 ) The cascade is perfect. Circle of light, life, what is and not. . .

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  2. Sue Vincent says :

    You have really caught the essence of this phot with the artwork, Kerfe, and the poem is, as always, excellent.

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  3. Claudia McGill says :

    The artwork just blew me away. Beautiful.

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  4. Jodi says :

    BLOWN AWAY!!!!! Again…. Genius!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Sharon Mann says :

    I let out a little gasp when I opened your post today Kerfe…magnificent.

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  6. pensitivity101 says :

    Wonderful, and so fits Sue’s photo.

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  7. rivrvlogr says :

    So many ways of reading this.

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  8. Lynz Real Cooking says :

    This is awesome! Love the poem!

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  9. memadtwo says :

    Thanks Sue! once again.


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