Scarecrow Joins the Circle Dance
Autumn. I fall into disrepair. The sky still covers me, but my shadow dissolves into the remains of the golden ocean that heretofore eddied and flowed at my feet. My skin lies ragged, unfilled.
I was crowned, once, with dark discordant ornaments. They sit on other thrones now, unrepentant pretenders, still calling the sun, the wind–the land itself–to task.
A crow flies over
a graveyard—blackness on stone–
change hangs in the air
When I saw Frank Tassone’s Haikai Challenge about scarecrows, I was intrigued. I can’t think of Scarecrow without thinking of Robert Okaji’s wise sage. So whatever I did would be colored by what Robert has written. I also decided to use the words from Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday, synonyms for ghost and hollow, as many of them seemed to fit on Scarecrow too.
As to Crow–he’s always around here somewhere.
Once again, different light makes the metallic paint change like the weather and the seasons…and this is another artwork inspired by Joan Mitchell being inspired by Van Gogh. Circles within circles.
Also linked to dVerse Open Link Night.
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I love your paintings and your haibun is lovely too.
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Thank you.
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A lovely post, Marta and such awesome paintings and haibun. Too good.
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Thank you!
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Welcome
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (10/19/18): Kerfie Roig of Method Two Madness’ latest #haibun for my current #haikai challenge and #dversepoets!
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Thanks for the inspiration Frank! This is a great prompt.
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My pleasure 😇! Thank you for sharing!
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The honorable scarecrow, you have brought him/her to life. Beautiful art.
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Thanks Sharon. They do seem alive, don’t they?
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I can imagine a conversation between those two scarecrows.
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Thanks Ken. Robert’s scarecrow invites conversation I think.
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You are so talented – your words and the images blend and give birth to perfection.
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That is such a lovely thing to say! Thanks!
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You are so welcome.
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A superb balance of art and poetry….
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Thanks Evelyn. I like that you see balance.
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Wow amazing words and art
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Thanks Lynn
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Reblogged this on O at the Edges and commented:
Beautiful images. Beautiful writing. Kerfe Roig honors Scarecrow, and knocks it out of the park once again!
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I thought of Robert’s Scarecrow, too, when I saw the prompt.
I love the dreaminess of this, and also a sense of waiting, perhaps foreboding. I really like crows, but these lines gave me a little shiver.
“A crow flies over
a graveyard—blackness on stone–
change hangs in the air”
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Thanks Merril. Crow definitely knows the darkness. Fall is a very in-between season, straddling the edge of dark and light.
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Yes, that is true.
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I feel your words and descriptions every week. Yes, I have a Crow, too. I love the imagery of the scarecrow: the end of harvest, the harbinger of death in the dying off of summer… Lovely cycle in the circle of life. Frank grabbed me this week with the hungry ghosts of Buddhism, and now you, with the scarecrow. Wow… You guys are so good! ❤
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Thanks Colleen. I think WordPress is one big circle of ideas bouncing off each other.
And…it’s good to have a Crow!
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LOL! We draw energy and inspiration from our community – that’s for sure. Yes, Crow came to me this year. Actually, I think there are two, a male and a female that tend to hang around my house. The female raised a nest of cow birds (blackbirds with brown heads) as her own this year. They still visit. ❤
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Expanding the family…
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Perfect! ❤️
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I liked the haiku about the crow and change.
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Thanks Frank. Autumn seems much more about change than the other seasons to me.
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GORGEOUSSSSSS!!!
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Thanks Jodi!
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Beautiful art, and words to equal! This pensive season…
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That a good word for it. Thanks!
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You have really brought heart and emotions to the faithful scarecrow.
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Thanks Bjorn.
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Scarecrow shedding its empty skin. I just love the way you use the image of disrepair to make the scarecrow seem like a king in exile (change of kingdom, change of seasons!)
Also the artwork is loooooooooovely. CIRCLE. I love, love, love, how the colours go from black to gold like the white space giving birth to a big gleaming moon.
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Thank you. I am stuck in circles at the moment, and learning as I go. The colors I owe to Joan Mitchell and Van Gogh, and who better to emulate?
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Love the images of the autumn season and the crow flying over the graveyard. A wonderful share, thank you.
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Thanks Grace.
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Those paintings literally took my breath away! Gorgeous! 😍😍
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Thanks!
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The scarecrow might be named Richard II, his hollow crown appeared to circle a hollow crown, but not when you have him such poignant voice. I feel like I have much of my life simply kept vigilance where I was placed, by choice or circumstance is increasingly irrelevant to me. Your delapidated king has a lot in common with me. 🙂
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Thanks Lona. I hope you are filling yourself with new things that put you in a better place now.
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Wonderful the way you put this all together, Kerfe! Artwork is evocative too, for this time of year.
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Thanks Betty, autumn definitely has its own forms.
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So well done, Kerfe. “Unrepentant pretenders” to describe those “ornaments” really gave those ominous birds another layer of depth. The abstract painting fit the haibun with the discordant gold and almost neon yellow outside the circle.
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Thanks. Crows have many layers to them…
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Love that… So perfectly captures the season.
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Thanks Steve. It’s here!
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Love your colors and it does give the feeling of autumn and scarecrows! 🎃
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Thanks Jill!
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Your paintings are great. I love the combination of colors. I also think your Haibun is wonderful with lots of great imagery. 😀
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Thanks Vashti. I owe the colors to Joan Mitchell and Van Gogh–masters of color, both.
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