unforsaken
I thought I would visit the Oracle this week to see what She had to say about Sue Vincent’s photo prompt, above.
I had already done my painting, and I guess it’s not surprising that the Oracle confirmed that many treasures lie below the surface, even in the darkest times.
rocks breathe ancient bones,
fertile earth of pure starlight–
deep spirit rivers
climbing windpaths into air–
the murmuring of seedsong
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This is so lovely
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Thank you Rosie.
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Lovely. I particularly like the last line – the murmuring of seed songs. I am listening for them too.
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Thanks Suzanne. I think we all are.
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Pure starlight… yes. Treasures indeed!
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Yes. Thanks Lona.
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The painting is perfect, capturing the rich life beyond the stak surface… and the poem touches the heart of this landscape.
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The richness that emerged when I started to paint seemed to fit, even though the photo looks darker. Thanks Sue.
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I think you caught the inner landscape, rather than the outer.
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The painting is so vivid and alive, Kerfe and I agree, that last line… the murmuring of seedsong… you can hear this in the painting.
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It’s there, even if we can’t always see it. Thanks Damien.
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There are so many surprises below the surface…you painting certainly portrays this.
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Thanks Sharon. There are, indeed.
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Absolutely gorgeous. And that last line! The colours are so rich in both words and painting.
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Thanks Jane. The Oracle gave me just what I needed.
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It’s perfect.
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Perfect fit, both art and words. Your painting breathes.
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Thanks Ken. The landscape is always breathing, and I’m pleased that comes through in the painting.
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Beautiful, Kerfe. Like others, I think that last line is wonderful, but really the whole thing–almost an incantation. The Oracle always knows, doesn’t she?
Your love your art, too.
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Thanks Merril. She does know.
The painting surprised me. Watercolor does that.
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amazing! It is incredible how many different creations you’ve made in the circle and all the beautiful words they’ve inspired!!!
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Thanks Jodi . I’ve accumulated quite a collection at this point.
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Love your poem….and artwork as always!
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Thanks Betty.
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