Acquisition ~ rubaiyat

Ken honors me with his (as always) thoughtful and hopeful response.

rivrvlogr

Acquisition

I hold aloft what holds me down,
My sense of self, as yet unsound.
No sense of where my mind should be,
My troubles named, within me found.

And yet this weight that’s placed on me
Need not be what the world should see.
Acknowledging that I’m not bound
May offer possibilities.

All month, I held off from attempting to write a rubaiyat, finding no interest in the form. I guess I just needed something to write about. I found that in Kerfe Roig’s Inquisition. I left this as a comment, and I’m just under the wire for Frank Hubeny’s month-long prompt at dVerse, Poetry Forms: Rubaiyat.  This is written in iambic tetrameter, with a rhyme scheme of AABA BBAB.

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7 responses to “Acquisition ~ rubaiyat”

  1. rivrvlogr says :

    🙂 Thank you, Kerfe. 😀

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  2. Jodi says :

    what an honor to be such inspiration 🙂

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  3. D. Wallace Peach says :

    You are definitely inspiring. A lovely poem by Ken.

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  4. annell4 says :

    It has to be something that keeps us grounded…could be sense of self…or….not.

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