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Seeds catch the air, scattering, dispersing, falling. They burrow under the earth, embedded, laden with green.  They wait to be painted in rainbows, to laugh with joy as they open and seek the sky.  They remember the kisses of bees.

The North Wind pushes back, sunless and relentless, chilling its moisture into frozen blankets of grey.

Sleeplessness holds me–
I like awake, listening,
heavy with the dark.

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Merril at dVerse asked us to consider March Madness, using the haibun form.

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39 responses to “Overcast”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says :

    I love the impatience of the seeds, but may there be no frost taking them

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  2. D. Wallace Peach says :

    Wonderful as always.

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  3. Jodi says :

    Oh how I love you thoughts on what those seeds might be thinking… ❤

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  4. V.J. Knutson says :

    Your description is equalled only by the beauty of your images.

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  5. jazzytower says :

    Love “kisses of bees”. Such a cool way to think of it. Nice.


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  6. Janice says :

    Your circles are always amazing…I am particularly struck by the intensity of this one….

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  7. Jane Dougherty says :

    Listening like the seeds for the wind to drop. Bring on the rainbows.

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  8. Sharon Mann says :

    Beautiful art and words. We have rain today so there will be rainbows.

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  9. L. Stevens says :

    I loved your haiku at the end, well done!

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  10. merrildsmith says :

    There is such lightness in the first part–the seeds and rainbows and kissing of bees (what a wonderful phrase!). Then the tension of the pushback of cold winds. This is definitely March madness. Well done, Kerfe!

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  11. Priscilla Bettis says :

    Brrr, I can feel the winter chill.
    Beautiful painting.

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  12. Frank J. Tassone says :

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #3: Mamadtwo’s latest #haibun for #dversepoets!

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  13. Frank Hubeny says :

    Nice line: “heavy with the dark” The dark does seem heavy.

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  14. Charlie O'Shields says :

    Yeah… “lie awake listening. Heavy in the dark” .. adore those words. So true! Beautifully created image as well! 😍

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  15. Ennle Madresan says :

    WOW, this is so impressive–both the art and the writing! Must come back later when I have more time to read and ponder 🙂

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