surrounded

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I consulted the Oracle this morning and ended up with a Lai poem, the featured form at dVerse for May.  The rhymes are pretty slanted, but the message suits this fine morning that has cleared from grey to breezy blue.

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I’m posting this for NaPoWriMo, but I may try the Shakespeare prompt later if I have time.

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28 responses to “surrounded”

  1. Sharon Mann says :

    Time to dance! The art takes on many shapes and visions, but it reminds me of a flower opening for the first time.

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  2. Jane Dougherty says :

    I’m impressed! Getting a lai out of the Oracle. I like it, so much I didn’t even notice the form which I’m not a fan of yet.

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  3. Beverly Crawford says :

    Your lai is cleverly presented with found words. Well done!

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  4. Jade Li says :

    Beautiful artwork with a lovely lai to boot 🙂

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  5. merrildsmith says :

    Well, I guess I shouldn’t be surprised that the Oracle can come up with a lai.
    I don’t think I would have realized that’s what it was if you hadn’t said.

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says :

    Oh.. this was great, to make the challenge even greater.

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    • memadtwo says :

      Thanks Bjorn. In a way it made it easier, my word choice was so restricted. I often work better that way, especially when I’m having trouble getting started with something.

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  7. Grace says :

    I specially love dances with sacred rhythm. An enchanted lai offering. Thanks for joining our poetry form challenge.

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  8. Jill Kuhn says :

    I see a face mask – your colors are fantastic!!

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  9. Frank Hubeny says :

    I like the dancing with sacred rhythm.

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  10. kim881 says :

    The oracle did well to serve you up with sibilant words that glisten in this lai, Kerfe. I love the thought of ‘sky blue cloud women!

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  11. purplepeninportland says :

    This is excellent!

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