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I am am three wishes
caught in a vast sea-tossed net
of indecision

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Grace at dVerse asked us to use the words I am in a first person narrative.

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44 responses to “triangulations”

  1. The Abject Muse says :

    Wicked! Love your images & words.

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  2. Lucy says :

    Very haunting. I love this!

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  3. Tom Donovan says :

    Beautiful Haiku poem, Kerfe and Nina… Magnificent…

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  4. brian miller says :

    If i had 3 wishes i wonder what i might like. Being such a small commodity i might be fraught with indecision as well. I wonder if the fruit on the plate represents those wishes too. Hmm

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  5. Grace says :

    I love your art work and your verses. I wish I have those 3 wishes to decide what I want to happen in my life. Thanks for joining us.

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  6. boundlessblessingsblog says :

    A beautiful Haiku, Marta and your painting is awesome. The jar with the fish inside and fruits at the side.

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  7. Frank J. Tassone says :

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #3: K’s latest haiku for #dVersePoets #MTB!

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  8. Beverly Crawford says :

    Decisions, decisions…our lives depend on our choices! Evocative write.

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  9. Sherry Marr says :

    “I am three wishes”….I love that.

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  10. rivrvlogr says :

    Welcome. This is one crowded net.

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  11. Frank Hubeny says :

    Very nice approach to those three wishes.

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  12. davisbrotherlylove says :

    A bit Matisse-ey. Love it.

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  13. robertawrites235681907 says :

    A lovely word / picture combo, Kerfe.

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  14. hank77 says :


    One is presented with choices all the time. Choices made for us are a no-no! If only wishes are secured as desired!


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  15. calmkate says :

    a lovely insightful haiku! Your accompanying art highlights your creativity, thanks K

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  16. Just Barry says :

    Paralysis by analysis. Lovely poem.

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  17. kim881 says :

    I love the senryu, Kerfe, the artwork and, of course, the choice of music!

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  18. Dave Kingsbury says :

    Moi aussi – wonder how widespread this feeling is during lockdown when so much seems beyond our power to alter …

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  19. msjadeli says :

    “Oh I love you when I forget about me.” One of the best lines EVER written in any song on the subject of love. I like how the fish bowl is about to fall off the table. The shadows that haunt any decision can paralyze a person. Excellent offering, Kerfe.

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  20. Lona Gynt says :

    Is it indecision, or perspicacity? Or better yet, simple breathing? I don’t know, but we are all up to our gills in whatever it is. glad to swim with you a bit in these tethered syllables. Much love K

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