halfway (Thursday doors and more)
mark not words, but boundaries–
you call them kindred
because they verge on your dreams
waves of receding
spirits returning like stars,
still and glittering
naked and exposed inside the lens of your life
My first sevenling poem, for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday challenge with synonyms for family and peace.
I took the above photo on Broadway, somewhere in the 80s I think. If you look closely you can see my headless figure.
This door belongs to a Con Ed substation at 110th and Amsterdam. The building itself is unmemorable, but I like the design of the door.
I spotted these flowers a few weeks ago when walking in Riverside Park. I had never seen what I thought to be an oak tree flowering before.
I could not figure out its identity until this weekend I saw it had seed pods. They were instantly identifiable online–jimson weed.
A toxic member of the nightshade family, although it does have medicinal and hallucinogenic uses. Evidently animals know to steer clear, but humans fall prey to its effects on a regular basis, not always accidentally.
And I wanted to share the view of the tower of light taken from my window Saturday night.
You can join in Thursday doors here.
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- September 20, 2021 -
These are great doors, Kerfe. I can see you in the reflection. This is a wonderful poem. Exquisite.
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Thanks Robbie. I like this form, and I’ll try it again.
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Wonderful share
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Thanks!
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I wouldn’t stay clear of these two doors either. Lovely.
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Thanks Manja. I was lucky to find that reflection!
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These are lovely doors, and I enjoyed your poetry. I’m trying to think if this is the first poetry post for Thursday Doors. In any case, it’s a wonderful one. Thanks.
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Thanks Dan. I think I’ve written poems before with my doors, but I bet Manja has also. I’m sure during NaPoWriMo in April she does a poem with her doors, and maybe other times too.
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After posting the comment, I realized that others have. In any case, I think it’s a very nice creative combination.
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It is. As Colleen pointed out, a good theme for a poetry book.
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Jimson weed in the city. I’m familiar with it from my childhood in the country. Love to see it in the city!
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I would never have noticed it if not for thinking it peculiar that there were flowers on an oak tree. It was growing next to a stump, which is why I assumed that. But of course now I will look at it every time I pass by.
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When I was young and my sister even smaller, she asked me to help her name some of her paper dolls. I got vreative about it and suggested Jimson Weed, and the Bush family – Rose, Pyracantha, and Nandina. To be fair, I really thought these were really interesting words and I didn’t mean to tease her, but my mother heard my sister calling the figures these names and got the story, made me explain to her they weren’t really people’s names. Which I didn’t see why they couldn’t be. I didn’t see why there had to be official names and you couldn’t use anything else (times have changed since then all right). But anyway I did. My sister said she liked them and asked me to give her more interesting names. I do not know what the moral of this story is, but Jimson Weed and his many Weed family members live on in many forms, I guess…
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I love that story. Polly Esther was famous at one of the textile mills where I was employed. One of my daughters had a boy named Jameson in her class…why not Jimson? Better than Jayden any day.
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I’ve often thought fabric names would make fantastic names for people. I’ll start with Rayonne (my preferred spelling…)
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Charmeuse is a good one too.
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Wonderful doors and such a beautiful poem, Marta. Lovely.
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Thanks Marta.
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Welcome 😊
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Beautiful poem that goes with that door. I love all the reflections in it (of course), and I do see your headless figure.
I like the other doors and nature shots, too.
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Thanks Merril. I did think of you when I saw the reflection. A capture that can never be planned.
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Yes–but well done!
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I love those last lines especially, perhaps because I hate having my photo taken!
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Thanks Ingrid. I’m with you on the photos.
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The doors are great! The second one is memorable. Are these in London or Amsterdam? Love the flowers too, so elegant:) Emille
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Thanks Emille. All the photos are NYC. I seldom leave it.
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Kerfe, the door is stunning along with your poetry. I’ve got to look up the sevenling poetry form. Your words have a haunting beauty to them which matches the image of the tower of light commemorating 9-11. Is the moon in that last image? Beautiful… I like the idea of a photo/poetry book inspired by the images of doors and poetry to go with each photo. NYC has such great architectural elements! ❤
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Thanks Colleen. Yes, the appearance of the moon was serendipity. Jane has used the sevenling quite a few times and I’ve been meaning to try it.
And yes, I’ll never run out of new doors in this city!
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The decoration above the door looks almost like a faceless head with hair. So cool how you mirror that in your own image in the window of the door. The panes of glass look like a collage. The datura/jimson weed seeds are sold on the internet but when I see what it does to people who take them, no thanks. They grow here because someone threw seeds out at one time… There is an oracle-like feel to your sevenling.
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Thanks Jade. They do look like a collage.
I agree about taking jimson weed. But I will be on the lookout for it now. I suspect there’s more of it around.
And the Oracle, too, seems to be always hovering about.
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You’re very welcome, K.
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I love your door photos. The poem is wonderful and now I’m itching to try a sevenling.
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Thanks D. I’ve been wanting to try it for awhile. It’s a good form, and I’ll use it again.
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I did see your headless self and that door has an elegant surround. I agree that the shapes in the second one make it interesting.
janet
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Thanks Janet. They definitely don’t do surrounds like that on newer buildings. Cost is almost always the determining factor.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Shreya.
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I dove into your poem a couple of times and enjoyed it, Kerfe. Cool doors, especially the Con Ed one. And I didn’t know that Jinsom weed has such beautiful flowers.
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Thanks Diana. I’ve heard of Jimson Weed, but never seen it up close. Always something new to see. And you know I like circles.
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Ha ha ha. I love circles. 🙂
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The perfect shape.
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doors are a kind of mask, don’t you think? or maybe I just got too close to the (jimson) weed ~
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That’s a good comparison. They are a lot like a visage. I’m keeping an eye on the jimson weed–no one seems to have harvested it as yet.
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Nicely done. 🙏
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Thanks Bela.
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