Another Phantom (Thursday) Door

An opening is full of mystery–
new passages, a shifting point of view.
What lies beyond this threshold—destiny?

Whose feet have trod this path, what history
has left its imprint here, its residue?
An opening is full of mystery.

Myriad layers of peripheries
cause our vision to be displaced, confused.
What lies beyond this threshold—destiny?

We wish for knowledge, rules, simplicity,
something more than a vague amorphous clue–
an opening is full of mystery.

A mirror to affirm validity,
a way to start again, transform, renew—
what lies beyond this threshold—destiny?

A life of meaning, synchronicity–
the what the where the why the how the who–
an opening is full of mystery.
What lies beyond is waiting—what will be?

This closed off doorway to what must have once been an elegant building, the Saxony, has always seemed mysterious–particularly since it’s been ornamented with a potted tree. A little research indicates it’s been merged with a neighboring building into a larger co-op, so I guess that’s where the entrance is located now. I’ll have to go back and look for it. It seems a shame that they closed it off. Emory Roth is a well known architect and designed many residences on the Upper West Side. You can see a photo of the entire building here.

I wrote the villanelle for Ingrid’s prompt at dVerse, bending the rules a bit, as I tend to do.

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47 responses to “Another Phantom (Thursday) Door”

  1. Dan Antion's avatar
    Dan Antion says :

    I love the way you combine poetry and doors. That mush have been a magnificent entrance at one point.

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    • memadtwo's avatar
      memadtwo says :

      Thanks Dan–there’s usually an appropriate poetry prompt from some source. And I agree about the entrance. I’m sure at one point the bottom floor contained no retail–but a Broadway storefront is a valuable commodity.

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  2. Mary (tqhousecat)'s avatar
    Mary (tqhousecat) says :

    I love this Villanelle! I tend to break the rules and sometimes I downright smash them to smitherines!

    Liked by 2 people

  3. D. Avery @shiftnshake's avatar
    D. Avery @shiftnshake says :

    What a great poem, a fitting form for that mysterious entryway. Awesome!

    Liked by 2 people

  4. hdwoonie23's avatar
    Helen Dehner says :

    You present us with an image and questions we can ponder a long time. When next I come upon a closed off door, I’ll think of your poem.

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Teagan Riordain Geneviene's avatar
    Teagan Riordain Geneviene says :

    Doors and a lovely poem as a bonus! Well done, Kerfe. I see the fire escape as a “door” too — a door to safety. 🙂 Hugs on the wing!

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  6. Cheryl Batavia's avatar
    Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet says :

    An intriguing photo and delightful musings about the mysterious closed-off entryway. The villanelle simulates the thought process very well!

    Liked by 2 people

  7. robertawrites235681907's avatar
    robertawrites235681907 says :

    This is a most intriguing poem, Kerfe, and it goes beautifully with this bricked up doorway.

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  8. Ingrid's avatar
    Ingrid says :

    An excellent Villanelle in both form and content, Kerfe! I like the change in wording at the end, it really grabs the reader’s attention and opens yet another door of possibility…

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  9. ben Alexander's avatar
    ben Alexander says :

    what a find, Kerfe! and your poem with all of its questions just brings that magical non-door to life for me!


    David

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  10. Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr's avatar
    Ken / rivrvlogr says :

    Well crafted, and framed as well as that doorway.

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  11. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says :

    I loved this, and that door turned into a metaphor for every mystery that we might find beyond the next opening.

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  12. Manja Maksimovič's avatar
    Manja Maksimovič says :

    A brilliant villanelle and a lovely potted (I read “potty”) ghost door.

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  13. Suzanne's avatar
    Suzanne says :

    It must be very exciting to live in New York. Some to the architect there is stunning and of course, there are all the galleries and museums. I like the idea of doors opening into new mysteries. There are lots of doors beginning to crack open in my life at present but at present, where they lead is still a big mystery. Your poem captures that feeling well.

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  14. Suzanne's avatar
    Suzanne says :

    sorry – meant architecture!

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  15. boundlessblessingsblog's avatar
    boundlessblessingsblog says :

    Beautiful poem combined with the wonderful doors Marta🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

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  16. Tanja's avatar
    Tanja says :

    nice poem. maybe it was a door a long time ago?

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  17. Jane Dougherty's avatar
    Jane Dougherty says :

    How did I miss this? It’s a great villanelle, and it flows so well. The sound is so much better when there’s a beat, than when we count syllables.

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  18. Josh Sanders's avatar
    Josh Sanders says :

    Destiny and mystery🤗

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  19. purplepeninportland's avatar
    purplepeninportland says :

    Destiny behind closed doors. Intriguing poem, and wonderful photos!

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  20. I. J. Khanewala's avatar
    I. J. Khanewala says :

    As you said, a pity the door is closed off now. No one can now stand at the balcony and tell a visitor that s/he won’t be allowed to pass through the doors.

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  21. Lisa or Li's avatar
    msjadeli says :

    It’s a gorgeous building and I see it has a garden on the roof. That kind of vestibule is usually inside of a building and holds something like lights or water fountains.

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