Another Phantom (Thursday) Door
An opening is full of mystery–
new passages, a shifting point of view.
What lies beyond this threshold—destiny?
Whose feet have trod this path, what history
has left its imprint here, its residue?
An opening is full of mystery.
Myriad layers of peripheries
cause our vision to be displaced, confused.
What lies beyond this threshold—destiny?
We wish for knowledge, rules, simplicity,
something more than a vague amorphous clue–
an opening is full of mystery.
A mirror to affirm validity,
a way to start again, transform, renew—
what lies beyond this threshold—destiny?
A life of meaning, synchronicity–
the what the where the why the how the who–
an opening is full of mystery.
What lies beyond is waiting—what will be?
This closed off doorway to what must have once been an elegant building, the Saxony, has always seemed mysterious–particularly since it’s been ornamented with a potted tree. A little research indicates it’s been merged with a neighboring building into a larger co-op, so I guess that’s where the entrance is located now. I’ll have to go back and look for it. It seems a shame that they closed it off. Emory Roth is a well known architect and designed many residences on the Upper West Side. You can see a photo of the entire building here.
I wrote the villanelle for Ingrid’s prompt at dVerse, bending the rules a bit, as I tend to do.
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I love the way you combine poetry and doors. That mush have been a magnificent entrance at one point.
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Thanks Dan–there’s usually an appropriate poetry prompt from some source. And I agree about the entrance. I’m sure at one point the bottom floor contained no retail–but a Broadway storefront is a valuable commodity.
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I love this Villanelle! I tend to break the rules and sometimes I downright smash them to smitherines!
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Thanks Mary!
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What a great poem, a fitting form for that mysterious entryway. Awesome!
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Thanks D.
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You present us with an image and questions we can ponder a long time. When next I come upon a closed off door, I’ll think of your poem.
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Thanks Helen. I notice them everywhere now.
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Doors and a lovely poem as a bonus! Well done, Kerfe. I see the fire escape as a “door” too — a door to safety. 🙂 Hugs on the wing!
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Thanks Teagan. I don’t even notice the fire escapes anymore, but yes, a necessity.
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An intriguing photo and delightful musings about the mysterious closed-off entryway. The villanelle simulates the thought process very well!
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Thanks Cheryl.
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This is a most intriguing poem, Kerfe, and it goes beautifully with this bricked up doorway.
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Thanks Robbie. If only these buildings could talk…
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An excellent Villanelle in both form and content, Kerfe! I like the change in wording at the end, it really grabs the reader’s attention and opens yet another door of possibility…
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Thanks Ingrid. It was a good exercise for me. I can always use some structure!
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what a find, Kerfe! and your poem with all of its questions just brings that magical non-door to life for me!
❤
David
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Thanks David. Looking for new doors shows me many things I would not otherwise see. And there are always more questions of course!
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Well crafted, and framed as well as that doorway.
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It is a great doorway. I’d love to see it with the original door. Thanks Ken.
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I loved this, and that door turned into a metaphor for every mystery that we might find beyond the next opening.
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Thanks Bjorn. Doors are often metaphorical I think.
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A brilliant villanelle and a lovely potted (I read “potty”) ghost door.
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Perhaps a potty for some creatures….thanks Manja.
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It must be very exciting to live in New York. Some to the architect there is stunning and of course, there are all the galleries and museums. I like the idea of doors opening into new mysteries. There are lots of doors beginning to crack open in my life at present but at present, where they lead is still a big mystery. Your poem captures that feeling well.
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sorry – meant architecture!
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Beautiful poem combined with the wonderful doors Marta🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Thanks Marta.
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Welcome 😊
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nice poem. maybe it was a door a long time ago?
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Yes, it was once the entrance to the building, but they merged with he building next door and moved the entrance,
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How did I miss this? It’s a great villanelle, and it flows so well. The sound is so much better when there’s a beat, than when we count syllables.
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Thanks Jane. I haven’t written one in awhile, but it’s a good form to work with. I think the last one I wrote was for one of your challenges.
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Ha! I did try to write one and gave up on it. It’s too tempting to be outside.
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After all that fog and grey, yes–enjoy it.
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We’re into the early spring rains now. It was too good to last. It was almost 70°F yesterday.
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Destiny and mystery🤗
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Indeed. Thanks Josh.
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Destiny behind closed doors. Intriguing poem, and wonderful photos!
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Thanks!
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As you said, a pity the door is closed off now. No one can now stand at the balcony and tell a visitor that s/he won’t be allowed to pass through the doors.
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That’s true!
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It’s a gorgeous building and I see it has a garden on the roof. That kind of vestibule is usually inside of a building and holds something like lights or water fountains.
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There are some beautiful lobbies. I think the doormen would object to someone photographing them though. I’m even leery of taking photos of doorman-attended doors. (K)
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My imagination is going on this. Imaging going in there with someone else, who then distracts the doorman while you take pics…
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They wouldn’t even let you get that far. There is one building that I want to work up the courage to ask if I could photograph their lobby. I’m pretty timid though.
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Beautiful! 🙏
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