Private Property (Thursday Doors)
NO TRESPASS
ING—no mice, no men.
Cat’s away,
but no mice
may play—(not even dust mice)–
I am WARNING you.
This handsome building sits empty–hopefully awaiting renovation. The signs on the door say WARNING/ NO TRESPASSING in duplicate with some kind of official city buildings condemned sign. The boarded up and graffitied windows add that it’s PRIVATE PROPERTY.
It does have a rather stern door guardian keeping watch.
The W3 prompt from Muri this week was to write a blitz poem about mice. I tried, but I just can’t write a blitz. A shadorma, however…and mice are no problem either. Speaking of No, the poem also fits nicely into Sarah’s No!Vember prompt at dVerse.
And look for more doors here at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.




You are right about the stern-faced guardian. I like the details on the roof and windows. I suspect the mice (and rats) will ignore the warnings–which the inhabitants of the adjacent buildings may not appreciate.
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I suspect you are right, having lived next door to a vacant building. Only one rat, but many many mice. That one had squatters too. This looks fairly secure against that at least.
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I think one rat would be one too many!
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It was! It fell for the peanut butter on the snap trap luckily. The mice were much more difficult, and never totally disappeared…even my neighbor’s cats could not get rid of them.
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Ewwwww!
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It certainly looks like you’d be ill-advised to trespass here!
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I love the poem. Kudos to you for managing multiple prompts. The building does look like one should stay clear. I can only imagine what it will be like once restored. It has so many good features. I don’t think the finished product, or any subdivided portion of it, will fall into my price range, but…
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Yes, I’m sure it will be pricey. But I’m also sure they will find a buyer or renter…
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New Yorkers of the era of that building must have been very fit, walking up so many flights of stairs every day in their own homes!
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There are still lots of walk-ups in NYC. Only buildings of more than 6 stories are required to have elevators. I lived in a 5th floor walk up myself–of course I was 22 years old at the time…but I know old, even partially disabled, people who still climb 4 or 5 flights of stairs to their apartments. It’s all what you are used to.
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I used to work on the 5th floor of the State Department in my early 30s, and I think I only rode an elevator 3 times in 5 years. I was a New Yorker and didn’t know it!
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you were!
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That’s a beautiful building. I hope someone is able to bring it back to its former glory.
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Thanks Liz. I’m sure someone will make the investment. Real estate prices are crazy right now.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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Well done to both prompts. Luv the strength of the warning line.
Much💛love
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Thanks Gillena.
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It looks very unwelcoming…
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It does need some fixing up.
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What a door guardian! He’s scary! They just don’t make buildings like this anymore. I’m always amazed at the beauty of the doors and ornamentation.
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No they don’t. It’s all glass boxes now.
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What a shame. These old buildings should be a National Treasure.
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A lot of them here are landmarked. That’s something…though it isn’t 100% protective, if the “right” people are trying to knock it down.
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I bet the cost to fix these buildings up is astronomical! I know how expiration was to update our house in Michigan! 🤦🏼♀️
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Everything costs too much right now…
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Absolutely… we’re just trying to ride it out.
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It definitely has character!
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It does! Hopefully some of the period details remain inside as well.
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How intriguing. What lies behind that well guarded door?
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I suspect it’s not very beautiful. But I’m sure someone will step up and make it so.
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I love this poem. The building has good bones. It will thrive.
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Thanks Claudia. I’m sure you’re right. The bones still look strong.
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We have houses like this in Philadelphia too, and it seems they are as strong as mountains. I love seeing a whole street of these lined up.
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It’s so sad to see lovely buildings going to ruin. But I love this post. Hugs on the wing.
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Thanks Teagan.
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I hope this building is restored, Kerfe. Your poem really highlights to look and feel of neglect in this situation.
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Thanks Robbie. I’m sure someone will eventually do the work. Real estate is valuable here.
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Yes, of course it is.
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Fabulous shadorma—and guardian! I would feel a chill just standing as close to him as you got for the photo!
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Thanks Sun. I see these guardians everywhere now. It amazes me that they never entered my consciousness before I started looking at doors. Imagine how many other things I’ve missed! and still miss, most likely.
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No dust mice, that’s a good one. Love these architectural posts. N.
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Would love to hit the lotto and buy it. A dream come true. Lady Luck, please walk my way!
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And to think people spend their money on yachts…
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Lovely poem and the doors too are architectural marvels.
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Now that’s a grand building!
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It is. I’m glad so many have been preserved.
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Hopefully someone will come along and add life and update the place! 😘
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Thanks Bela, I’m sure, with the profit to be made in real estate here, that someone will step up.
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Yes!
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I hope the building gets renovated and finds new life, besides mice. The cornice is lovely too. I enjoyed your poem, Kerfe. Playful and stern at the same time. 🙂
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Thanks Diana. It’s good to take a break from my serious side. (K )
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🙂
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