Ring 1FE (Thursday Doors)
sign in the window
says Ring 1FE—tempting,
full of promises
the lure of crystal
balls, lines written across palms–
your past, your future
yield to the lions,
passing through their golden fire–
stripped of illusion
gingerly we climb
with hope and fear, hand in hand–
seeking Lady Luck
The first thing that attracted me to this building was the brickwork, but the gold painted lions were hard to miss. As I crossed the street to get a closer look, the window on the right also drew my attention.
Hands in the window? Crystal balls, too, and other mysterious devices. Ring 1FE the sign said. For some reason this made me think of Joni Mitchell’s song “Roses Blue” on her Clouds album. Combined with the lions the invitation seemed both fated and ominous. I could see young Joni walking down this street in Chelsea and shivering a bit at the door behind which her friend Rose resided.
I continued on my way.
I’ve written a senryu chain for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday, and you can always find a wide variety of doors here at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.
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- January 24, 2023 -
The whole building is eye-catching but then that window of intrigue… I like the far away looking up photo, your chain of senryu match the chain of fire escape stairs. And while in the poem you climb the steps, I like the last seven syllables, intentional or not, “I continued on my way”. I was not familiar with that well paired Joni Mitchell song. Nice.
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Thanks D. I think those chains of five and seven syllables get stuck in my head!
I love those early Joni songs. Now I have to go look for my CD…
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I enjoy the poetry you wrap around the doors you find. I love Joni Mitchell, and that’s a really good song to associate with that window. Well done!
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Thanks Dan. There’s a Joni Mitchell song for every occasion I think.
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I’;m sure of it.
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The whole building— gorgeous
But those golden lions. Wow.
Lovely Senryu. So cool of you. Blessings.
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Thanks Selma. Those lions certainly create a unique entrance.
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I love how your senryu chain tells a story. I can see how the front of the building would have inspired it.
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Thanks Liz. I don’t think of myself as a narrative poet, but I did notice that myself. There are stories everywhere, and sometimes we’re lucky enough to catch one!
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You’re welcome, Kerfe. 🙂
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I can only say “ditto” to what D. Avery has written!
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Thanks Muri. D’s comments are always insightful. As is her own writing.
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The brickwork and the lions are definitely eye-catching, and the window is intriguing. A building full of mystery.
Did you see that Joni Mitchell is getting honored by the Library of Congress?
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I did see that! It’s good that she’s able to enjoy the accolades.
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It is. 😊
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Amazing brick work of the whole building and the entry is very attractive!
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Thanks Teresa. I really like the brickwork too.
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Love how this chain of senryūs reveals the story
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Thanks!
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The unreachable Lady Luck! Great poem, Kerfe!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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She does seem elusive doesn’t she? Thanks Yvette.
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When you said windows, I’m looking at that pattern on both sides of it. Then I noticed all the crystal etc. Really cool!
Pat
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Thanks Pat. I always notice hands, and that’s what drew my eye to the window.
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If that doesn’t look like the beginning of an adventure I don’t know what does. The addition of the “fire escape stairs” makes me imagine a creature that flies in the night using it to go to and from the apartment. Very cool and mysterious building.
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That could very well be! Thanks Jade.
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You’re welcome. Part of me would want to train a “trailcam” at it, and the other part doesn’t want to know.
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I know exactly what you mean.
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HI Kerfe, an excellent chain of senryūs inspired by a lovely picture.
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Thanks Robbie. This building seems like it has many stories inside.
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Very cool building with a lot of interesting detail!
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thanks Brenda!
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This is stunning, Kerfe… I love the fortune tellers window and your reaction to the invitation. The lions are gorgeous… the entire series is fab!
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Thanks Colleen. This building was another great find!
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I’ll say. Very unique!
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We all should have a gold lion, or two, adorning our doors!
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I agree!
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Lovely poem. The golden in the first photo is inviting to visit the building. It seems so warm indoors.
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Thanks Elizabeth. Definitely offering an invitation.
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So cool, the way this post came together! Somehow that window makes me think of “Bell, Book, and Candle” (the movie with Kim Novak and Jimmy Stewart); it would fit right in. Speaking of fate, wherever you stand on that and luck, Happy Year of the Rabbit! May the ten thousand things go your way.
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Thanks Sun. I don’t know that film, but anything with Kim Novak seems appropriate.
I’ve been working on some rabbits, they will start to show up next week. A welcome change of atmosphere in my opinion.
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Thanks for the elegant door. Love the music, which I listened to as I was responding to your comment at my end. 🙂
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Joni is always worth listening to. Thanks Frank.
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The building is superb and splendid. Your poem too is beautiful Marta
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Thank you.
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Welcome
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Beautiful doors and beautiful words to accompany them.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful details!
janet
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Thanks Janet.
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I love how you transform your lived experiences into poetry, Kerfe ❤
lovely.
❤
David
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Thanks David. Looking for doors has made me much more aware of my environment, and all its possible stories.
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Wow… doors, poetry, and Joni. Lovely! ❤️
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Thanks Gwen!
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Beautiful, Kerfe. Mystery is always tempting … xo
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Yes it is. Thanks Bela.
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