Evasions (Thursday Doors)
They say our finite ocean is
but a minor detail–
a boat
resting on the back of Great Fish–
that our true home sets sail
below
~stars~
are where we came from—light scattered
and caught by His Eye–
arranged
into what reflects His Matters–
the opposite of sky–
held, caged
~far~
away from home—I wish to leave
this vessel, to unlock
the door–
there is so much I can’t conceive–
my mind keeps casting thoughts
ashore
~where~
I number my questions, detail
the longings between words–
what if?
and why? Who Are You? Can you tell
me how air flies birds–
spindrifts?
I’ve written a double memeuente for the Thursday Doors Writing Challenge, using an image submitted by Teresa. Serendipitously, I found an image on Erik Johansson’s website that gave me a direction for my poetic narrative. Johanson’s work was introduced to us by Mish at dVerse as inspiration for a surrealistic poem.
I’ve also used some of this week’s words from the Random Word Generator.
I’ve always thought there was a connection between fish and birds.
You can see many doors (and their stories) every week at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.
And take a journey through alternate worlds at Erik Johansson’s website here.
59 responses to “Evasions (Thursday Doors)”
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- May 14, 2023 -
Yay wonderful poem! Thanks ❤️
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Thanks for your great door!
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This surrealist art is amazing! I love that first stanza. I hope to write some poetry today! You’ve inspired me, Kerfe! xx
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Always good to be inspired! Glad I could help.
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Oh, you inspired me! 🙏🏻
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What a wonderful combining of prompts and images! Love the poem! (gotta look into memeuente)
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Thanks D. The memeuente was my made-up form for Colleen’s 65th birthday–a memento with a puente bridge. The rhythm of the memento works well with the bridge, and I’m sure I’ll be using it again.
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Oh yeah! I remember that. Yes, a fine form!
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This is wonderful, Kerfe. I love how you tied Teresa’s door and the other image together. We need to understand that all life is connected. Thanks for adding this to the challenge
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Thanks Dan. I’m so glad you do this. Excellent door choices this year too.
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A lovely prompt combination that has produced a great fish poem, Kerfe! I love the way you isolated rhyming words and thought of a mind casting thoughts ashore.
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Thanks Kim. I often feel I’m casting my mind out into the world. it doesn’t always catch something though…
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Wow, I’m so happy you were able to collaborate the various prompts and images into this piece of profoundness. Nicely done!!
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Thanks Mish. This artist inspired many excellent responses.
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Hi Kerfe, what an extraordinarily imaginative poem. I really like the door and the fish island.
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Thanks Robbie. They were good images to work with.
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Fab combination of images and I love the form you have used, works so well Kerfe 💕
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Thanks Angela. I made the form up for Colleen’s birthday, but I think it’s a keeper.
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Yes it definitely is! ❤️
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I particularly like the last stanza of your poem.
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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Hi Kerfe, what an imaginative poem. I like how you tied all the images together.
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Thanks Patricia. These were good images to work with.
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I enjoyed the pharmacy museum tour–I saw comments were closed.
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Flying fishlings! 🙂 I’m glad that I get these emailed to me so the visual structure of the poem is preserved. WP’s Reader always forces its own formatting on things, but it’s so evocative and effective for this theme. I needed a good dose of Surrealism today; this was perfect.
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Thanks Sun. Surrealism seems very real these days.
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Wonderful post Kerfe. Such a profound poem.
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Thanks Kamal.
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Welcome Kerfe ❤️
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How lovely and a good combination of visuals. I also wrote a poem (and it’s again the InsideOut poem) to Teresa’s door yesterday and will post it next Thursday.
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Thanks Manja. It’s definitely a door begging for a story. I look forward to reading yours.
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“there is so much I can’t conceive-my mind keeps casting thoughts ashore” sums it up pretty well. I like the visual form with the isolated intro words also. Thanks for your visit, I hadn’t visited or read yours before.
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Thanks Jim. I appreciate the visit also.
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Love your poem and the images of a door and fish. They worked well together to inspire you. Well done!
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Thanks!
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Truly fantastic, Kerfe
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Thanks David. I like that Dan does this every May–it’s fun.
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I enjoyed the call and response feel of this poem and the images it accompanies, K. The title too makes sense with the idea of doors 🙂
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Thanks Sunra. Doors are a rich resource.
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Kerfe, I love how you pulled this all together. It’s all a matter of perspective isn’t it.
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It is indeed. Thanks Jade.
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You’re welcome.
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What a lovely poem, Kerfe! I must try out your form.one day.
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Thanks Punam. I’m sure you would do a wonderful job with it.
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You are welcome. I’ll give it my best shot.
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Ahh I love the moon fish birds.
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Thanks Melissa. Theat are always connected in my mind.
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I love the poem, Kerfe, and the images are perfect complements. I too have sensed a connection between birds and fish. I know that when I’m scuba diving I have, at times, a sense of flying. 🙂
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There’s a reason we talk about birds diving! Thanks Diana.
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Hey Kerfe,
I’m looking for your email address to send the books from the tour winnings🙏🏾
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memadtwo@gmail.com
Thanks!
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Thank you. I’ve sent 🙏🏾💜
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Thanks Jude!!
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I really enjoyed this a lot, Kerfe. Hugs.
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Thanks Teagan.
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Intriguing poem. I enjoyed it very much and really liked the photo with the fish. 🙂
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Thanks Brenda. That was definitely an intriguing photo.
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