The Third Story (Thursday Doors)
1
Majestic, they said, but
enter at your own risk–
dogs live there–horses, too–and
insects we can’t identify.
2
The thing is, the future requires
adjustment. Your Utopian maps
tell me nothing. They only
impede the stitching together of time.
3
Orange looks different at
night, but I turn on the lights so the
door is visible. You can’t miss
it. It sits in the clouds, gaudy, towering.
4
Space is always disordered–
check all the boxes and it verifies nothing.
Interactions are not a test—what is
permissible is learned, but not necessary.
5
Like home, the gift of colour
inside our far-flung journeys replaces
needless worry with surprise–
erratic prose turns poetic, jumps into the air.
Coincidentally, this is my third poem for the May Writing Challenge at Thursday Doors. When the Random Word Generator chose door as its first word this week, I knew I would once again be referring to its list for what I wrote. Another word that jumped out at me was orange, so I knew which photo I would choose to write about as well.
The W3 challenge this week from Punam is to write an acrostic poem from a list of words she provided. I strung two of them together, meditation and discipline. Then I chose a lot of the beginning words from the random word list and wrote around what resulted, including other words from the list whenever they seemed to fit. It is an interesting method of constructing a poem.
Above is one of my orange-embellished door collages from the 1980s. And for more doors from the present, you can always visit Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.



A lovely poem, Kerfe. I like the prompt picture you chose.
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Thanks Robbie. I remember when this picture was posted, I took special note of it.
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Wow!! Lovely images and phrases! Very insightful and great to hear about your projects!!
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Thanks!
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Love all your verses. Your words “orange looks different at night” resonated deeply.
Great work, Kerfe!!
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That was the line that struck me as well, Suzette.
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Orange is one of those colors. Thanks Liz.
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Thanks Suzette!
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Is this a cadralor? I thought it read like one, but I’m not sure.
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It’s based on what I think a cadralor is, but I’m never sure if I have it right. In the end, I like writing in this way, whether it follows the rules correctly or not.
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It seemed to meet the brief for a cadralor to me, although I’m uncertain about the form, too.
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Nicely done, Kerfe. Thank you for thinking of TDWC when crafting such a cool poem. I like it. I also like the door collage.
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Thanks Dan. This building demanded a poem I think.
I have lots of those old door collages. I’m sure more will show up in the future.
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I think you’re right. I’ve been looking at this photo since it arrived. I have a short (and shorter) story for next week, but I haven’t decided if there will be another.
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You’re a word collage master. This reads wonderfully ❤️
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Thanks David. As with everything, I just follow along.
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but it works out so friggin’ well every time! 😲
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You are too kind David, thanks.
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Kerfe ❤
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the brilliant Suzette Benjamin is now live (it's up until Monday):
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Thanks David.
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*hug*
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What a fascinating process and result. I would not notice the acrostic without you saying so, and it makes it all even better.
I was not surprised when you chose the same door as my last poem next week will be based on. It’s already written. Last week you had Teresa’s fish door which I have today. 🙂 We move in similar doorways.
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Thanks Manja. It’s true, we are drawn to the same thresholds. I haven’t figured out next week yet. I am always waiting until the day before.
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I wrote all at once at the start of the month so that I could read all the others in peace, but then I haven’t really, just a few. I will.
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It’s hard 6o keep up.
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Fascinating process and poem. It seems like a dream, fragmented images that go together. I like your collages.
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Thanks Merril. My waking thoughts are just like this. My daughters are always trying to figure out what I’m talking about.
My collages used to be much simpler. I like them too, but not sure I could go back there again.
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You’re welcome.
Honestly, my thoughts are sort of like this, too–like I’m always aware there are several levels or currents of thought going on simultaneously. I suspect my kids are the same, but not my husband.
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He doesn’t need a translator.
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Well, sometimes. . . 🙂
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All relationships require translation sometimes.
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What Merril said. And wow!
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Thanks Claudia. I had fun with this one.
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I really like the idea of creating a poem from a series of directions and how that inspired you further.
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Yes, it’s like a puzzle.
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Well done, Kerfe. Lovely poem and so is the artwork. I liked that photo a lot too. It really captures the imagination, doesn’t it. Hugs.
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Thanks Teagan. There are so many good doors, it’s hard to choose. But the word “orange” chose it for me.
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I like how you put it all together, Kerfe. What strikes me about the top image is how the new is built on the old, but also, if the whole structure is taken as parts of a life, where the body is worn out but the ideas in the head are new. Love the collage after Mondrian, just lovely. These lines jump out and are definitely food for thought:
“Interactions are not a test—what is
permissible is learned, but not necessary.”
For a person who is hypervigilent (sp?) it does feel that way at times.
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Thanks Jade. It’s such an interesting building, and I like your analogy.
I too am still thinking about some of these ideas. The Oracle has her hand in the Random Word Generator for sure.
That’s an old collage–I don’t remember if it was directly inspired by Mondrian but it has that feeling.
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I just went by the tag on the collage: https://methodtwomadness.files.wordpress.com/2023/05/mondrian-city-s.jpg
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I may have stuck the title on after I did the collage…I have no memory of what inspired it at all. I’m sure about the city part though.
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Layers upon layers in this poem. I like how it read. There’s a lot to take in, but well worth the time spent in studying it.
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So love how you presented this K. The photo does its job well too. I loved this line: “Space is always disordered–
check all the boxes and it verifies nothing” Yup, so it is!
Thanks for sharing. Lovely.
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Thanks Selma.
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A lovely poem Kerfe. Awesome images. Very inspiring 👏
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Thanks Kamal.
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Welcome dear Kerfe 🌹
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Stunning words and images, Kerfe. The photo made me think about the windows to the soul and how sometimes when things feel tough, one door closes and another door opens. Your perceptions are spot on! Meditation takes discipline. I love this presentation so much.
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Thanks Colleen. I’ve been thinking about that door ever since it was first posted. You are right about doors. (K)
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You always see the magic…
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Interesting method and you came up with extraordinary verses. Your acrostic is so good that I did not even notice it at first reading, the last stanza is lovely. Love the collages. Thanks for joining in. ❤️
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Thanks Punam. I bent the prompt a little as usual, but I enjoyed the challenge.
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You are welcome. I am glad you enjoyed it and rules are meant to be bent sometimes. 🙂
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I enjoyed hearing your process in creating such a fascinating poem. Loved that you used my photo as well. 🙂
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Thanks Brenda. As I think I remarked when you posted it, it’s a great photo!
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