The Third Story (Thursday Doors)

image by Thoughts of a Wanderer

1
Majestic, they said, but
enter at your own risk–
dogs live there–horses, too–and
insects we can’t identify.

2
The thing is, the future requires
adjustment.  Your Utopian maps
tell me nothing.  They only
impede the stitching together of time.

3
Orange looks different at
night, but I turn on the lights so the
door is visible.  You can’t miss
it.  It sits in the clouds, gaudy, towering.

4
Space is always disordered–
check all the boxes and it verifies nothing.
Interactions are not a test—what is
permissible is learned, but not necessary.

5
Like home, the gift of colour
inside our far-flung journeys replaces
needless worry with surprise–
erratic prose turns poetic, jumps into the air.

Coincidentally, this is my third poem for the May Writing Challenge at Thursday Doors. When the Random Word Generator chose door as its first word this week, I knew I would once again be referring to its list for what I wrote. Another word that jumped out at me was orange, so I knew which photo I would choose to write about as well.

The W3 challenge this week from Punam is to write an acrostic poem from a list of words she provided. I strung two of them together, meditation and discipline. Then I chose a lot of the beginning words from the random word list and wrote around what resulted, including other words from the list whenever they seemed to fit. It is an interesting method of constructing a poem.

Above is one of my orange-embellished door collages from the 1980s. And for more doors from the present, you can always visit Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.

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56 responses to “The Third Story (Thursday Doors)”

  1. robbiesinspiration's avatar
    robbiesinspiration says :

    A lovely poem, Kerfe. I like the prompt picture you chose.

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  2. Courtz’ Studio Kreations's avatar
    Courtz’ Studio Kreations says :

    Wow!! Lovely images and phrases! Very insightful and great to hear about your projects!!

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  3. Suzette Benjamin's avatar
    Suzette Benjamin says :

    Love all your verses. Your words “orange looks different at night” resonated deeply.
    Great work, Kerfe!!

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  4. Liz Gauffreau's avatar
    Liz Gauffreau says :

    Is this a cadralor? I thought it read like one, but I’m not sure.

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  5. Dan Antion's avatar
    Dan Antion says :

    Nicely done, Kerfe. Thank you for thinking of TDWC when crafting such a cool poem. I like it. I also like the door collage.

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  6. ben Alexander's avatar
    ben Alexander says :

    You’re a word collage master. This reads wonderfully ❤️

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  7. Manja Maksimovič's avatar
    Manja Maksimovič says :

    What a fascinating process and result. I would not notice the acrostic without you saying so, and it makes it all even better.

    I was not surprised when you chose the same door as my last poem next week will be based on. It’s already written. Last week you had Teresa’s fish door which I have today. 🙂 We move in similar doorways.

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  8. merrildsmith's avatar
    merrildsmith says :

    Fascinating process and poem. It seems like a dream, fragmented images that go together. I like your collages.

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  9. Claudia McGill's avatar
    Claudia McGill says :

    What Merril said. And wow!

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  10. Teagan Riordain Geneviene's avatar
    Teagan Riordain Geneviene says :

    Well done, Kerfe. Lovely poem and so is the artwork. I liked that photo a lot too. It really captures the imagination, doesn’t it. Hugs.

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  11. Lisa or Li's avatar
    msjadeli says :

    I like how you put it all together, Kerfe. What strikes me about the top image is how the new is built on the old, but also, if the whole structure is taken as parts of a life, where the body is worn out but the ideas in the head are new. Love the collage after Mondrian, just lovely. These lines jump out and are definitely food for thought:

    “Interactions are not a test—what is
    permissible is learned, but not necessary.”

    For a person who is hypervigilent (sp?) it does feel that way at times.

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  12. Tanmay's avatar
    Tanmay Philip says :

    Layers upon layers in this poem. I like how it read. There’s a lot to take in, but well worth the time spent in studying it.

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  13. SelmaMartin's avatar
    SelmaMartin says :

    So love how you presented this K. The photo does its job well too. I loved this line: “Space is always disordered–
    check all the boxes and it verifies nothing” Yup, so it is!

    Thanks for sharing. Lovely.

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  14. boundlessblessingsblog's avatar
    boundlessblessingsblog says :

    A lovely poem Kerfe. Awesome images. Very inspiring 👏

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  15. Colleen Chesebro's avatar
    Colleen M. Chesebro says :

    Stunning words and images, Kerfe. The photo made me think about the windows to the soul and how sometimes when things feel tough, one door closes and another door opens. Your perceptions are spot on! Meditation takes discipline. I love this presentation so much.

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  16. paeansunplugged's avatar
    paeansunplugged says :

    Interesting method and you came up with extraordinary verses. Your acrostic is so good that I did not even notice it at first reading, the last stanza is lovely. Love the collages. Thanks for joining in. ❤️

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  17. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar
    Brenda's Thoughts says :

    I enjoyed hearing your process in creating such a fascinating poem. Loved that you used my photo as well. 🙂

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