Door Number Three (Thursday Doors)
A cluster of doors
on my walk today—back home,
I sit quietly,
going through all the photos.
I can still feel the cold wind.
Short days now—falling
leaves, faded flowers, colors
left behind till spring–
is that why darkness catches
my eye, stands out, makes me pause?
What lies behind these
doors? A magic kingdom where
wild geese preen feathers,
wings floating you across the
threshold into lambent light?
From across the street these three buildings look fairly nondescript, but I was attracted to them by their dark-colored facade, which stood out on the block. I could see that the center brownstone had lost its original doorway and the parlor floor ornamentation, but otherwise seemed to be unchanged on the exterior.
A closer examination showed a lovely doorway,, with beautiful details and guardians.
The doors to the two outer brownstones are still virtually identical–whoever owned them over the years has taken good care to preserve them.
The parlor floor window has four guardians, and there is an eagle watching over the window on the garden floor.
The center door is a poor imitation of the original that it replaced.
You many be wondering where the wild geese came from….ask Melissa, whose W3 prompt this week required that they make an appearance in the middle of the third stanza of our tanka chain.
Because everything reminds me of a song, here’s where the title came from.
and since Steve Goodman’s on the turntable, this one’s for Dan
Another life cut way too short. But he sure left us a lot of good songs.
Visit Dan and his Thursday doors here.






You incorporated the wild geese into your poem seamlessly! “City of New Orleans has been my all-time favorite song for many, many years.
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Thanks Liz. When I saw the geese in the prompt, I was not sure what to do, but anything could be behind these doors, especially with the light reflecting off the glass.
Dan really likes trains, so I hope he will appreciate the song too. I’d forgotten how much I like Steve Goodman. Now I need to figure out where that CD is.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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I love this take on the W3 prompt!
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Thanks Muri.
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I wondered about the wild geese, but you made it work. They are lovely doorways. I love all the details. I agree about Steve Goodman.
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Thanks Merril. The geese were a challenge. But then I remembered that anything could be hiding behind a closed door.
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You’re welcome. So true! 🙂
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Maybe the fact that we have no idea what’s behind most doors adds to their attraction. Then again, maybe the geese I see flying south on my walks are only going to their home in NYC. It’s all fun to think about. I like these doors. I also like the little splash of color added by the scaffolding. A testament to the necessary maintenance. Good job on the challenge and the poetry prompt. Good choice of music, too.
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Thanks Dan. I’m sure those geese have secret hideouts in many places.
I too like the signs of ongoing life that attend many of these doors. They are part of he constant changes that accompany anything that is in use.
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Kerfe, I totally respect that your hesitance regarding this prompt, but your poem is genuinely brilliant – you made those three lines entirely your own.
I love this so much.
❤
David
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Thanks David. I’m feeling more and more that we should leave classical Japanese poetry to the Japanese. We can create lovely verse that imitates it, but it all sounds the same. I don’t know if it’s the language or the culture, but we are not Japanese, and our writing is more vibrant when we acknowledge that.
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is it any more arbitrary than the shadorma, for example?
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Shadorma has no subject matter restrictions. Maybe it’s just that I’m not a nature writer. If everyone is using the same selection of nature words, and writing about a particular season–well, we’re none of us Basho. We create the same images, pretty or true as they might be. It’s very difficult not to do so I think.
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Hi, Kerfe!
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the lovely Jennifer Russo, is now live:
Enjoy ❤
Much love,
David
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This is a new form for me…too complicated for my mind to process this morning. But I do need a door poem as usual…
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💕 Kerfe 💕 ~ it’s new to me too 😃
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HI Kerfe, I keep saying this, but your really do have some wonderful doors in NYC. I enjoyed your poem. Our days are getting very long now.
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Thanks Robbie. Yes, we are moving in opposite directions. I much prefer the longer days.
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Me too 🌞
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I don’t know what happened to my comment. I press reply and I got a message to subscribe to your blog. Weird. Anyhow, the pictures are lovely and I really enjoyed your poem about shortening days.
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WordPress is so strange lately!
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Oh, I do love the details and the guardians on the windows and the doors. Nice find! 🙂
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Thanks Brenda. I’m especially taken with the window guardians.
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Another beautiful stroll through the city! Your questions within the poem are very effective. And I love these geese!
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Thanks D. I can’t stop putting questions in my poems…
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I am left in awe of the magic in this poem, Kerfe 💙
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Thanks Lesley.
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There are so many fascinating details to these doors, the closer you look!
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I know, that’s so true. Hard to believe that doorways were once so full of artistry. These days they are all metal and glass.
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Love this trio Kerfe, especially the last one 🙌
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Thanks Ange.
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👋🏻I thought maybe I would see some geese above a doorway somewhere. No matter, still enjoyed. We never do know what the next door we walk through will bring us. I, for one, hope it isn’t geese.😅
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But if it’s a magic kingdom?
I know I followed the letter of the prompt, but not exactly the spirit…however you got a some really excellent and unique responses from other people. It looked simple but those are often the most challenging.
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I wasn’t complaining. I think yours is great, and yes, unique.😊 It was difficult to choose just one. They were all great! I was challenged myself, as I wrote mine after selecting the lines as well.
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It is so difficult.
I know you weren’t complaining–but I also know there were other poems that satisfied the prompt much better than mine did, while capturing the seasonal spirit beautifully as well.
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Interesting doors, Kerfe — and a wonderful atmospheric poem. You worked the prompt into it seamlessly. Hugs on the wing.
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Thanks Teagan. You know there are often surprises behind doors…
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Many things are more beautiful when you make the time to take a closer look. Happy you decided to take a closer look at these beauties. I had no idea Steve Goodman wrote, “City of New Orleans” and it’s a shame he left us so soon.
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Thanks Jade. He was one of those peer-recognized artists that never really made it big, but I’m sure he had a lot of good music left.
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You’re welcome, K.
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