Egyptian Roof Garden (Thursday Doors)
The sky is alive–I consider
the opening, the threshold
with no door—what is
in, what is out, where do I
begin? Does my body still
contain me? I feel
strange, as if I am not
actually there—here?—as
if I am threaded with
ephemeral currents, netted
in this floating airscape that
does not seem to be
located anywhere at all.
I fall together. I am a part
of something. Is it cosmic? I am
not certain. In this still place I have
no need to respond to the unasked.
I visited the Egyptian-inspired Roof Garden Commission, by Lauren Halsey, at the Metropolitan Museum, last May. It was a perfect day.
Halsey stated that she wished the installation to feel like “a spiritual portal to the Mothership, the stars”–and it definitely did.
Although based on Egyptian architecture, Halsey’s structure references her family, friends, and neighborhood of South Central Los Angeles in the faces and hieroglyphic ornamentation on the pillars and walls.
Halsey is very interested in world-building, and wants to create welcoming community spaces for the neighborhood where she grew up, spaces that reflect the energy and imagination of the people she knows. This temple serves as a prototype for one she hopes to build in LA.
You can see an interview with Halsey at the Roof Garden, here.
My poem is a jamb-jitsu, David’s prompt this week for W3.
And there are always more doors to see at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.







Kerfe, your imagery of the sky, the threshold, and the question of self gives me a sense of contemplative wonder.
Also, I think the blend of your experience and artist’s vision vividly conveys the installation’s essence. Halsey’s goal of creating community spaces shines through, and your post beautifully connects it to her roots. Your photos transport me to the Metropolitan Museum.
❤
David
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Thanks David.
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Kerfe,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the delightful Aishwarya Kannan, is now live:
Enjoy! 🥳
Much love,
David
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I’m don’t know if I’ve ever written a rondeau–I’ll have to look. But freedom is one of those words that I think has lost all meaning. Not sure I have anything new to add to the discussion.
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Fair enough! 🙂
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I did write one for another W3 prompt, although I used the last part of the first line as the refrain instead of the first part. I like the form.
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Kerfe,
This week’s W3, hosted by the lovely JM Negi, is now live 🥳
Enjoy!
~David
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HI Kerfe, David has said it all so I’m just going to say ‘Hear! Hear!’ A wonderful poem and post.
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Thanks Robbie.
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I love the photos of this wonderful exhibit. I hope she is able to fulfill her dream and create the one she wants in her city. Your poem brings amazing images to mind. I enjoyed this visit.
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Thanks Dan. I was hoping to convey some of the feelings it aroused, and I’m glad you responded to it. I too hope she is able to build something similar for her community.
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Well done poem! You nailed it, Kerfe! I am always amazed at the depth of your reflection and mixing that with the doors you present. The viev through the unusual archways are amazing…
Wonderful post!!
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Thanks Suzette, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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I love this cosmic wondering and wandering.
“netted
in this floating airscape that
does not seem to be
located anywhere at all.”
I didn’t realize it was a form until you mentioned it. I think the Oracle was whispering, too.
What a wonderful place to visit on a perfect spring day!
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It was! The Oracle has her imprint all over both the structure and the words. Thanks Merril.
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No visible doorway to ourselves or the sky, very meditative ….. 💞Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne.
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What an extraordinary place, Kerfe! I’m awed. It obviously inspired you. The poem is breathtaking. I loved your descriptions of the feelings it evoked throughout this post. Hugs.
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Interesting installation. Looks like a long stretch of roof and I like how the shrubs and treetops make layers under the cityscape. I’ve seen that saying before and a good credo to live by: be who you is and not who you aint because if you is who you aint you aint who you is. The face in the last pic looks like Little Richard 🙂 I can imagine standing in the space would be somewhat disorienting.
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Thanks Jade. I agree about the credo. The faces are all friends and family of the artist. She names a lot of them in the video.
It was disorienting, but in a good way. I really felt close to the sky in a way that, say, the Empire State Building doesn’t provide. Maybe having Central park all around is part of it as well. You’re floating in treetops.
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Like this roof garden!
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It was wonderful–thanks!
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For me, the opening images helped me better feel the words of your reflection. Beautifully done … and the exhibit looks wonderful.
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Thanks Frank. It was a wonderful surprise, as I had no idea of what to expect when I went up. And of course the beauty of the day added to the magic.
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Kerfe this Jamb-Jitsu is brilliant! And the architecture that inspired it is beautiful! You picked the perfect day to visit it – the blue sky and the white stone is a perfect contrast!
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Thanks Muri. It was indeed one of those perfect days–to be cherished no matter where you are, but I was lucky to have this space in which to spend part of it.
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A fascinating poem for an equally entrancing installation, Kerfe. Even the pictures convey a unique feeling – that portal to the stars enriched by community. I like Halsey’s vision. Thanks for sharing her work and yours. ❤
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Thanks Diana. It was a magical experience.
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The form of the poem helps to convey the dizzy feeling of falling up through this amazing portal. Halsey attained her wish that her installation feel like “a spiritual portal to the Mothership, the stars” and yet her mission is very grounded, in a good way. Yeah, you have some cool things in that city.
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Thanks D. Sometimes everything intersects in the right way, and this was one of them. I agree–a visionary but one who has roots.
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Your poem is the perfect entry into this incredible art piece. Thank You for including the video with the artist talking about her intent for the piece and how she created it. I hope her LA project comes to fruition.
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Thanks Liz. I agree that the video was an excellent supplement to understanding the art, and I too hope she can build something similar for her community. Looking at the photos really brought back the magical feeling of the place.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe. The entire post was a real treat.
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Oh, this place is breathtaking! I would love to walk through there.
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It was really a magical experience. Thanks!
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Kerfe, your Jamb- jitsu is brilliant. I love the imagery you’ve created.
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Thank you!
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Kerfe beautiful poem and such a great Egyptian door. The pictures are awesome 👍👍👍
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Thanks Kamal. It really was a beautiful exhibit.
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Always welcome dear Kerfe 😊🙏
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Thanks for sharing
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You’re welcome.
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I reiterate David’s words, Kerfe. ❤️ for a smashing poem and post.
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Thank you Lesley!
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“No need to respond to the unasked” will stay with me for a while. Thank you for this!
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Thank you!
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I like the idea of ‘falling together’ rather than apart. I also like the idea of a beautiful spring day!
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Nice Article
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Thanks!
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I love the ending of this one. Some questions really don’t need to be answered, just pondered. ❤️
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Thanks! I find most questions to be like that…
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