Abandoned Uncertainties (Thursday Doors)

“Who am I and what is my purpose?”
–W3 prompt question, Matt Synder

Sometimes I feel like a closed door
with no structure—no ceiling, floor–
abandoned to the whims of the weather–

Or perhaps under construction–
covered with warnings, instructions
designed to turn the outside world away—

My exterior is plain, bare,
and inside I’m no more aware
of where I’m going, or what I will be.

I’ve been waiting for a chance to use that abandoned door I photographed on Columbus Avenue earlier this year. Matt’s prompt at W3 (and my answer to his question) was a perfect fit.

I also picked out a couple other uncertain doorways from my archives.

Matt asked for a 9-line poem, so I consulted Muri’s Around the World list and found the tercet form Tripadi from Bangladesh. I like it a lot–both the rhythm and rhyme flow very naturally.

A closer look at that abandoned door shows that it still has possibilities–remove the paint, refresh the decorative glass, give it some new hardware–it could still provide a welcome sight at the end of a long day. That’s a good enough purpose in my book.

And be sure to visit Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion, where you will find plenty of well-used doors.

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69 responses to “Abandoned Uncertainties (Thursday Doors)”

  1. michnavs's avatar
    michnavs says :

    A thought provoking reply to the prompt

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  2. Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar
    Rajani Radhakrishnan says :

    Lovely… and a great close.

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  3. Frank @ Beach Walk Reflections's avatar
    Frank @ Beach Walk Reflections says :

    That is a creative approach of combining words and images for Thursday Doors!

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  4. Dan Antion's avatar
    Dan Antion says :

    Well done. A great way to use doors and door-ish things. Your poem shares the sadness the door might feel.

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  5. SelmaMartin's avatar
    SelmaMartin says :

    Oh! My! —a closed door
    with no structure—no ceiling, floor–
    abandoned to the whims of the weather–?!
    That’s a sad feeling to have. Sorry about that. But here’s the thing I want you to remember, you are the most beautiful door. Like a heart that opens and shuts timely—like wings. I know. Bless you, K. Xo

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    • memadtwo's avatar
      memadtwo says :

      Thanks for the affirmation Selma. I don’t really find it sad. Although my life is always in flux, I have a good support group of family and friends. And as Muri pointed out, doors are full of possibilities, no matter where they are or what condition they are in.

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  6. M.'s avatar
    M. says :

    i feel I can relate ❤️

    As far as the tapestry goes I had written a poem in advance as to offer to David for a future colab. If i choose your poem I will send you mine and allow you to manipulate with yours till both of us are happy, I will then post the final poem on my blog.

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  7. sunhesper's avatar
    sunhesper says :

    I relate to all these doors and am certainly, indefinitely under construction… They also call books to mind — The Starless Sea; The Ten Thousand Doors of January; Neverwhere — my favorite portals of all.

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  8. Colleen Chesebro's avatar
    Colleen Chesebro says :

    The tercet is a new form, but like you, Kerfe, I love the way your words flow.

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  9. circadianreflections's avatar
    circadianreflections says :

    That’s a great door find and fits abandoned. It really doesn’t belong is a category I thought of straight-away.

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  10. Liz Gauffreau's avatar
    Liz Gauffreau says :

    I really like the pairing of the poem and the abandoned door. Habitat for Humanity would probably have taken it.

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  11. murisopsis's avatar
    murisopsis says :

    Kerfe! This is a marvelous use of the Tripadi for the W3 prompt! You are so good with the micropoetry forms and this just drives home the point! As for the content – we are all at times doors both open and locked, festooned with welcome signs and those bricked over and closed to the world. The great thing is that doors are portals of possibilities! All it takes is one curious thief to jimmy the lock and steal the heart!

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  12. Suzette Benjamin's avatar
    Suzette Benjamin says :

    Beautiful post, Kerfe!! Well done tercet and poignant take on the prompt question. Love the “uncertain” doorways both you are right havs purpose based on effort and/or perspective. An enjoyable share.

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  13. Claudia McGill's avatar
    Claudia McGill says :

    I like this. Never give up on me, this door and your poem say.

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  14. Graham Stephen's avatar
    Graham Stephen says :

    Oooof, nice! Did you open that door? Wonder where it leads…

    -✧✦☆❖◈❋✤☆✦-∞-♡-∞-✦☆✤❋◈❖☆✦✧-

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  15. serendippitysays's avatar
    serendippitysays says :

    Another excellent and poem. I read it three times, enjoying both its initial simplicity and its underlying depth.

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  16. robertawrites235681907's avatar
    robertawrites235681907 says :

    A terrific poem, Kerfe. Well done on finding a nine line poem form to use. I like the doors too.

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  17. Stine Writing and Miniatures's avatar
    Stine Writing and Miniatures says :

    This is so relatable and that feels great

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  18. judeitakali's avatar
    judeitakali says :

    Your beautifully written poem is raw and stinging. The first thing I felt when I saw the abandoned door was a deep sadness. Even in that condition it is beautiful.

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  19. boundlessblessingsblog's avatar
    boundlessblessingsblog says :

    A creative approach to the Thursday doors Kerfe 😊

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  20. wordsandcoffee1's avatar
    wordsandcoffee1 says :

    A perfect use for these intriguing door photos! Lovely!

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  21. Melissa Lemay's avatar
    Melissa Lemay says :

    I like the glass on the door a lot. The closed door without structure is a great metaphor for self many days.

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  22. ben Alexander's avatar
    ben Alexander says :

    a closed door
    with no structure—no ceiling, floor–

    I wish I had thought of writing something like this, Kerfe. Such jarring imagery – it’s just perfect.


    David

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  23. willowdot21's avatar
    willowdot21 says :

    Very clever , great photos and I like the poetry very much 💜

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  24. Oddment's avatar
    Oddment says :

    “Perfect fit” indeed. I am especially intrigued by “no more aware of…what I will be.” What a huge idea that is: awareness of what we will be. It’s full of contradictions, and I wonder if that’s part of the idea of any door. Nicely done.

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  25. Eugi's avatar
    Eugi says :

    Excellent approach to the prompt!

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  26. Teagan Riordain Geneviene's avatar
    Teagan Riordain Geneviene says :

    That door seems too pretty to dump. I hope someone rescues it.

    I love your poem. These uncertain doors are definitely intriguing. Hugs.

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  27. D. Wallace Peach's avatar
    D. Wallace Peach says :

    I enjoyed the Tripadi and the prompt was perfect for your photos. I love the idea of giving old doors new life and making them welcoming at the end of a long day. (Now I want to go home and do that for my doors). 🙂

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  28. Mthobisi Magagula's avatar
    Mthobisi Magagula says :

    Great blog post here💯👏

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  29. Jill Kuhn's avatar
    Jill Kuhn says :

    Hi Kerfe, I have often thought a door would be a good art theme, thinking about all the hands that have touched it and the stories of their lives. So interesting to see a door just sitting there abandoned in the city… someone must have wanted something else although I agree with you, a coat of paint could make a nice difference. 😉 I enjoyed your poem and to think about what kind of door would describe myself? There is a sign at the lake that says; “Beware… well, just beware.”

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  30. Lauren Scott, Author's avatar
    Baydreamer - Lauren Scott says :

    A wonderful response to the prompt, and excellent poem. Love the door too!

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