Abandoned Uncertainties (Thursday Doors)
“Who am I and what is my purpose?”
–W3 prompt question, Matt Synder
Sometimes I feel like a closed door
with no structure—no ceiling, floor–
abandoned to the whims of the weather–
Or perhaps under construction–
covered with warnings, instructions
designed to turn the outside world away—
My exterior is plain, bare,
and inside I’m no more aware
of where I’m going, or what I will be.
I’ve been waiting for a chance to use that abandoned door I photographed on Columbus Avenue earlier this year. Matt’s prompt at W3 (and my answer to his question) was a perfect fit.
I also picked out a couple other uncertain doorways from my archives.
Matt asked for a 9-line poem, so I consulted Muri’s Around the World list and found the tercet form Tripadi from Bangladesh. I like it a lot–both the rhythm and rhyme flow very naturally.
A closer look at that abandoned door shows that it still has possibilities–remove the paint, refresh the decorative glass, give it some new hardware–it could still provide a welcome sight at the end of a long day. That’s a good enough purpose in my book.
And be sure to visit Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion, where you will find plenty of well-used doors.




A thought provoking reply to the prompt
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Lovely… and a great close.
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Thanks!
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That is a creative approach of combining words and images for Thursday Doors!
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Thanks Frank. I try never to let a door go to waste!
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That a way!
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Well done. A great way to use doors and door-ish things. Your poem shares the sadness the door might feel.
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Thanks Dan. I’m hoping someone rescued it from the street. That happens more often than not. My younger daughter is famous for it, as I was in my youth.
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I’ve done the same on a few occasions.
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Oh! My! —a closed door
with no structure—no ceiling, floor–
abandoned to the whims of the weather–?!
That’s a sad feeling to have. Sorry about that. But here’s the thing I want you to remember, you are the most beautiful door. Like a heart that opens and shuts timely—like wings. I know. Bless you, K. Xo
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Thanks for the affirmation Selma. I don’t really find it sad. Although my life is always in flux, I have a good support group of family and friends. And as Muri pointed out, doors are full of possibilities, no matter where they are or what condition they are in.
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i feel I can relate ❤️
As far as the tapestry goes I had written a poem in advance as to offer to David for a future colab. If i choose your poem I will send you mine and allow you to manipulate with yours till both of us are happy, I will then post the final poem on my blog.
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Thanks Matt. It seems to strike a chord with a lot of people.
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I relate to all these doors and am certainly, indefinitely under construction… They also call books to mind — The Starless Sea; The Ten Thousand Doors of January; Neverwhere — my favorite portals of all.
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Thanks Sun. Your book is also full of portals.
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It is indeed! 🙂
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The tercet is a new form, but like you, Kerfe, I love the way your words flow.
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Thanks Colleen. Muri has a lot of good forms on her list, but this one flows especially well.
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That’s a great door find and fits abandoned. It really doesn’t belong is a category I thought of straight-away.
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Thanks! A great find, I agree. I hope someone rescued it from the street.
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I really like the pairing of the poem and the abandoned door. Habitat for Humanity would probably have taken it.
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Thanks Liz. I hope someone took it from the curb and put it to good use. One of my first apartments was entirely furnished with things I found on the street.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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Kerfe! This is a marvelous use of the Tripadi for the W3 prompt! You are so good with the micropoetry forms and this just drives home the point! As for the content – we are all at times doors both open and locked, festooned with welcome signs and those bricked over and closed to the world. The great thing is that doors are portals of possibilities! All it takes is one curious thief to jimmy the lock and steal the heart!
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Thanks Muri. You see right through the words and images to the crux–yes, portals of possibilities, all of us. (K)
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Beautiful post, Kerfe!! Well done tercet and poignant take on the prompt question. Love the “uncertain” doorways both you are right havs purpose based on effort and/or perspective. An enjoyable share.
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Thanks Suzette. I think sometimes we try too hard to find a lofty purpose, when there are so many simple things we can do that are meaningful.
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Well said. And, I agree completely, Kerfe.
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I like this. Never give up on me, this door and your poem say.
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Exactly! Thanjs Claudia.
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Oooof, nice! Did you open that door? Wonder where it leads…
-✧✦☆❖◈❋✤☆✦-∞-♡-∞-✦☆✤❋◈❖☆✦✧-
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I am always opening that door. Thanks Graham.
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Another excellent and poem. I read it three times, enjoying both its initial simplicity and its underlying depth.
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What a nice complement! Thanks.
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A terrific poem, Kerfe. Well done on finding a nine line poem form to use. I like the doors too.
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Thanks Robbie. Muri’s list of poems has a wide range of forms to choose from.
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This is so relatable and that feels great
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Thanks Christine.
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Your beautifully written poem is raw and stinging. The first thing I felt when I saw the abandoned door was a deep sadness. Even in that condition it is beautiful.
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It is! And I’m hoping someone took it home with them to give it another life. Thanks Jude.
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A creative approach to the Thursday doors Kerfe 😊
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Thanks Kamal.
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Welcome dear Kerfe 😊
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A perfect use for these intriguing door photos! Lovely!
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Thanks Sarah.
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I like the glass on the door a lot. The closed door without structure is a great metaphor for self many days.
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Thanks Melissa. It is. I think if that door were freshened up a bit it could be both beautiful and useful. As would we, as you noted, some days.
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I wish I had thought of writing something like this, Kerfe. Such jarring imagery – it’s just perfect.
❤
David
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Thanks David. I think your interpretation suited you perfectly. (K)
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hi, Kerfe 👋🏻
I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by our lovely Heather (Sgeoil) is now live!
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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Thanks David.
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*hug*
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Very clever , great photos and I like the poetry very much 💜
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Thanks Willow.
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“Perfect fit” indeed. I am especially intrigued by “no more aware of…what I will be.” What a huge idea that is: awareness of what we will be. It’s full of contradictions, and I wonder if that’s part of the idea of any door. Nicely done.
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Thank you for your insightful comment. Yes, those thresholds always contain multitudes.
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Excellent approach to the prompt!
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Thanks Eugi!
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My pleasure!
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That door seems too pretty to dump. I hope someone rescues it.
I love your poem. These uncertain doors are definitely intriguing. Hugs.
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Thanks Teagan. The odds are in the door’s favor. New Yorkers are always rescuing things left on the curb.
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I enjoyed the Tripadi and the prompt was perfect for your photos. I love the idea of giving old doors new life and making them welcoming at the end of a long day. (Now I want to go home and do that for my doors). 🙂
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Thanks Diana. I think doors have many lives in them.
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Great blog post here💯👏
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Thanks!
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Hi Kerfe, I have often thought a door would be a good art theme, thinking about all the hands that have touched it and the stories of their lives. So interesting to see a door just sitting there abandoned in the city… someone must have wanted something else although I agree with you, a coat of paint could make a nice difference. 😉 I enjoyed your poem and to think about what kind of door would describe myself? There is a sign at the lake that says; “Beware… well, just beware.”
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Thanks Jill. Doors are a good metaphor for many things. And I like that sign…good advice!
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A wonderful response to the prompt, and excellent poem. Love the door too!
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Thanks Lauren.
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