Graffiti (Thursday Doors)
Stand in the middle they said. Look for an opening. Feel the wind. Discard your armor. Push the complications away. Become.
a globe
instead of a box–
a portal not a hard wall
Can I fly, sing, unconfined,
riding currents like a chord?
Can me become we?
I’ve written a liwuli poem to go with Bushboy’s photo contribution to the Thursday Doors Writing Challenge. I do like a poetic form that includes questions. It is also an answer to Sadje’s W3 prompt on the theme of hope. Whoever decorated that door is asking similar questions to the ones my poem asks I think, looking for that portal. You can’t locate a portal without hope.
The photo above of the portal of birds is from the Es Devlin exhibit at the Cooper Hewitt, which I featured in a previous Thursday Doors post.
And here’s a collage portal I did for a Kick-About prompt.
Here’s a translation of Bruce’s introduction to his performance in 1988, a year before the Berlin Wall fell: It’s nice to be in East Berlin. I want to tell you that I’m not here for or against any government, I have come to play rock’n’roll for the East-Berliners, in the hope that one day all barriers will be torn down.
Music is a portal of hope that connects us all.
And find more doors, as always, at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.



this is sooo cool
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Thanks Gabriella!
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Fascinating … so much in this short post to wrap my head around (and I say that in a good way). Bushboy’s photo is interesting to contemplate … the portals too … and to top it off with your thoughts about music as a portal is perfect … and of course, Bruce. Thanks for stimulating my morning.
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Thanks Frank. Happy to provide food for thought, as you always do for me.
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When I first looked at the door Brian shared, I wondered how anyone could work with it, yet there was something compelling about it. Now, I look at it and all I can think about is your lovely poem and the question you raise. Well done!
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Thanks Dan. I’ve been thinking about it too, and it fit itself into this prompt.
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“Riding currents like a chord”… That’s absolutely where I want to live. And that Es Devlin show just continues to astonish me; a master portal-maker for sure. I’d lose all track of time experiencing that vision of Dickinsonian feathered hope in person.
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Thanks Sun. Yes, a good place to be.
Devlin’s work is really extraordinary. More than anyone can absorb all at once.
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You sent me to google again. A liwuli poem! Perfect with the photos, another seamless meshing of prompts.
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Thanks D. I love question poems, and I like especially the way this one changes its form.
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Great poem and I love the sense of hope as a way through. Profound.
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Thanks Suzette. It’s the only way.
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Your questions deserve a resounding YES. Music is hope.
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Thanks Punam. It is.
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I LOVE the line “riding currents like a chord”! And of course “Music is a portal of hope that connects us all.”
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Thanks Liz. It is.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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“riding currents like a chord?” -memorable!!
I like too the globe versus the box and anyway doors are the way out and a way in – reminds me of the Suzuki quote
“What we call “I” is just a swinging door which moves when we inhale and when we exhale.”
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Thanks Laura–that’s a great quote. Doors have many manifestations.
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So much in this post, Kerfe! Like others I like, “riding currents like a chord”–but I like that it’s a question you are asking. And yes, music is a portal that connects us–along with other arts. I didn’t know or remember that Bruce had performed in East Berlin.
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Thanks Merril. We need to keep asking those questions.
I was looking for songs of hope, and “Chimes of Freedom” was on every list. There’s also a great version with Bruce, Tracy Chapman, Sting and a few other people done at an Amnesty International concert, but the fact that the Berlin Wall actually did come down a year after Bruce’s performance–who would have ever thought at the time?–was a clear sign of hope to me–that what looks impossible can actually change. There are ways to bring down those walls, even if we can’t see them right now.
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Gorgeous collage and the poem is inspired!! Love it all!
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Thanks Muri. The Challenge doors this year are excellent, and inspiring.
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Dear Kerfe, what a stunning post and poem! “Music is a portal of hope that connects us all” — beautiful and true words. I loved your collage too. Brian’s TDWC photo caught my eye too, but I got fixed on Hitchcock and all I could see was birds swarming out of the door. Yes, I saw the movie as a child and it made a lasting impression. 🙂
By the way, about one of the photos you offered for the challenge. What is the one with the white column and doorway sculpture? I’m sure it’s famous, but I’m not familiar with it. Hugs.
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Thanks Teagan. I had to leave the room in the middle of Hitchcock’s Birds. It’s interesting, I see the door as asking questions, looking for a way through. Our mind has it’s own method of making associations.
Here’s the link to the post about that photo:
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I had no idea what a liwuli poem is, so I thank you for that introduction. To bring that graffiti’d door into that poetic form is a wonder. Your wording is, as always, beautifully crafted. “Look for an opening.” It sounds simple, but, ah, those complications. The question form seems exactly right for this door, and the only way to deal with those complications.
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Thanks Maureen. What seems simplest is often the most complicated I find.
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Excellent “Doors” write!
The entire post is piquing, in a good way.
Thank you!
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Thanks Resa.
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Just so beautiful. I do hope ever day that I/we becomes We. Soon. Thanks, K. Lovely
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Thanks Selma. I hope so as well.
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Graffiti doors-you can’t go wrong.
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Indeed not. Thanks!
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The urge to perceive and create a more hopeful future is alive and well here, I’m glad to say! Liked the images of Nina Simone and Bruce Springsteen topping and tailing the post, too! Onwards and upwards!
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Yes, we mustn’t give up or give in…
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I love the Liwuli poem form, and you’ve done it justice. I also like a poetic form that includes questions! 🙂 Love the photos too.
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Thanks! Dan has some great doors in his challenge to work with. And that Es Devlin exhibit was full of wonderful art.
The Liwuli is indeed an excellent form.
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This is very interesting… no sharp corners, eh, Kerfe? These words leave me thinking… I really like the imagery here.
❤
David
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Thanks David. I like grids in art, but circles work better for relationships.
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Wonderful and lovely post Kerfe. Profound 👍👍
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Thanks Kamal.
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You are always welcome dear Kerfe 😊❤️
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Wow! These are nice and different ways to express oneself!
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Thank you!
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I love this:
“Music is a portal of hope that connects us all.” Lots to like about this post, Kerfe.
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Thanks Jade. I’m really enjoying the Thursday Doors writing challenge. Always plenty of good inspiration.
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You’re welcome. I didn’t know a writing challenge had been added. Will check it out if I ever get out to take more door pics.
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Dan dies it every May. People submit doors and you can choose from the gallery which ones you want to respond to. There’s always a good and varied selection.
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Wonderful questioning poem, Kerfe. The form intrigued me and like D., I headed to Google. The Portal of Birds is beautiful, and your collage made me want to step through. 🙂
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Thanks Diana. It’s a good form I think–as you know, I always have questions. And I’m always looking for portals too.
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Yes. You do and you are!
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hi, Kerfe 👋🏻
just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Suzanne, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/05/22/w3-prompt-108-weave-written-weekly/
enjoy 😁
much love,
David
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Thanks David.
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*hug*
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Wow! Love this article…good stuff!
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Thank you!
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My pleasure 🙏
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The portal of birds collage is amazing!! Love how the shadows add to the design.
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It is! The whole exhibit was full of wonderful things. Thanks Jill.
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About twenty years ago I was on a cruise ship – and all we had was a port-hole window…
Thank you for your imagery, and the other art that you share. Hope is a valuable tool, which is often neglected, especially by leaders who think restrictions and walls are the better answer.
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Thanks Jules. We need to hang on to hope and do our best to dismantle those walls.
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💕
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That portal of birds is amazing.☺️
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I know! Thanks Melissa.
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amazing post.☺️
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Thanks!
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