All I See (Thursday Doors)

photo by Miriam Hurdle

I enter
a series of openings–
pushed inside by darkness,
reflected in a two-way mirror
that absorbs all light.
How can I exist in transparency?
Am I merely a trick of the eye?
The threshold knows both sides of me;
the wheel reverses me.

A quadrille for Punam at dVerse who provided the word darkness. Every week I’ve looked at the photo Miriam provided for the Thursday Doors Writing Challenge, which, if you examine closely the last darkened doorway, contains a wheel. It looks to me like a place of both mystery and transformation. Punam’s word gave me, finally, an idea of what to write about it.

Once again, I’ve enjoyed this month of writing to the doors provided by the Thursday Doors participants. You can see the complete list of Challenge posts here, and visit the new weekly doors every week at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion, here. Thanks Dan!

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33 responses to “All I See (Thursday Doors)”

  1. Dan Antion's avatar
    Dan Antion says :

    What a wonderful take on Miriam’s door, Kerfe. I looked at that, but a story escaped me. You did very well.

    Judy Collins’ voice is so beautiful. Thanks for including that,

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  2. SelmaMartin's avatar
    SelmaMartin says :

    Wonderful, K 🤗

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  3. robertawrites235681907's avatar
    robertawrites235681907 says :

    Hi Kerfe, this is very clever. I hadn’t noticed that wheel until you pointed it out.

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  4. D. Avery @shiftnshake's avatar
    D. Avery @shiftnshake says :

    Ha, so you were indeed “pushed inside by darkness”, that is it took an extra prompt to give you the “opening” to this lovely poem.

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  5. Kymber @booomcha's avatar
    Kymber Hawke says :

    This is a wonderful post!

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  6. paeansunplugged's avatar
    paeansunplugged says :

    Dear Kerfe, thank you so much for responding to the prompt! Your poem reads like a gorgeous riddle and I love the closing lines especially.

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  7. Liz Gauffreau's avatar
    Liz Gauffreau says :

    You always have the best doors posts! I greatly enjoy them.

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  8. Suzette Benjamin's avatar
    Suzette Benjamin says :

    Well done Kerfe! Indeed a relatable question you posed: how can one exist in transparency…where is the reference point for existence if it is unseen.? Lots to ponder here.
    P.S. Thanks for mentioning the wheel in the inner room in the photo. I did not notice it.

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  9. Laura Bloomsbury's avatar
    Laura Bloomsbury says :

    was it the wheel of life? the doorways are like a doll inside a doll inside a ….love the questions you raised here too

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  10. Teagan Riordain Geneviene's avatar
    Teagan Riordain Geneviene says :

    Each component of this is lovely, Kerfe, and the whole is more beautiful than the sum of its parts. Hugs.

    PS: I’m using one of your photos tomorrow.

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  11. Oddment's avatar
    Oddment says :

    I’m so glad you wrote this. I’d felt a sense of foreboding from this image every time I looked at it, and so “pushed inside by darkness” resonated with me. “The threshold knows both sides of me” holds many thoughts — as always, wonderful wording.

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  12. murisopsis's avatar
    murisopsis says :

    Intriguing photos and the verse is perfection!!

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  13. melaniereynolds's avatar
    melaniereynolds says :

    I wish I could enter into that first photo! It looks like a wonderful place to explore!

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  14. boundlessblessingsblog's avatar
    boundlessblessingsblog says :

    Wonderful poem Kerfe 😊😊

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  15. Jill Kuhn's avatar
    Jill Kuhn says :

    What an interesting doorway! I could get lost in the colors and textures!

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