All I See (Thursday Doors)
I enter
a series of openings–
pushed inside by darkness,
reflected in a two-way mirror
that absorbs all light.
How can I exist in transparency?
Am I merely a trick of the eye?
The threshold knows both sides of me;
the wheel reverses me.
A quadrille for Punam at dVerse who provided the word darkness. Every week I’ve looked at the photo Miriam provided for the Thursday Doors Writing Challenge, which, if you examine closely the last darkened doorway, contains a wheel. It looks to me like a place of both mystery and transformation. Punam’s word gave me, finally, an idea of what to write about it.
Once again, I’ve enjoyed this month of writing to the doors provided by the Thursday Doors participants. You can see the complete list of Challenge posts here, and visit the new weekly doors every week at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion, here. Thanks Dan!



What a wonderful take on Miriam’s door, Kerfe. I looked at that, but a story escaped me. You did very well.
Judy Collins’ voice is so beautiful. Thanks for including that,
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Thanks Dan. I was glad to find a prompt that worked so well with it.
I agree about Judy Collins. She is also a great interpreter of songs.
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Wonderful, K 🤗
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Hi Kerfe, this is very clever. I hadn’t noticed that wheel until you pointed it out.
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Thanks Robbie. In photos, as in life, there is always more to see.
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You are right. I got such amazing canal shots in Amsterdam. The light treated me well.
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I’m looking forward to seeing them.
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Ha, so you were indeed “pushed inside by darkness”, that is it took an extra prompt to give you the “opening” to this lovely poem.
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Thanks D. That’s exactly right.
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This is a wonderful post!
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Thanks Kymber!
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Dear Kerfe, thank you so much for responding to the prompt! Your poem reads like a gorgeous riddle and I love the closing lines especially.
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Thanks Punam. Doors often inspire riddles I think.
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You always have the best doors posts! I greatly enjoy them.
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Thanks Liz. I enjoy doing them.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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Well done Kerfe! Indeed a relatable question you posed: how can one exist in transparency…where is the reference point for existence if it is unseen.? Lots to ponder here.
P.S. Thanks for mentioning the wheel in the inner room in the photo. I did not notice it.
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Thanks Suzette, I think the subtlety of the photo adds to the mysery and beauty.
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was it the wheel of life? the doorways are like a doll inside a doll inside a ….love the questions you raised here too
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I wondered about that too. Or the karmic wheel perhaps. Thanks Laura.
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Each component of this is lovely, Kerfe, and the whole is more beautiful than the sum of its parts. Hugs.
PS: I’m using one of your photos tomorrow.
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Thanks Teagan. I look forward to it! (and I’m honored)
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I’m so glad you wrote this. I’d felt a sense of foreboding from this image every time I looked at it, and so “pushed inside by darkness” resonated with me. “The threshold knows both sides of me” holds many thoughts — as always, wonderful wording.
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Thanks Maureen. It’s definitely a place with mixed messages–I think transitions always contain uncertainty, however necessary or inevitable they may be.
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Intriguing photos and the verse is perfection!!
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Thanks Muri.
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I wish I could enter into that first photo! It looks like a wonderful place to explore!
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It does! Full of mystery. Thanks Melanie.
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Wonderful poem Kerfe 😊😊
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Thanks Kamal.
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Always welcome dear Kerfe 😊❤️
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What an interesting doorway! I could get lost in the colors and textures!
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It is! I’d love to see what’s inside.
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