I attempt to write a list poem about cars (Thursday Doors)
I have never owned a car.
I have not even driven a car in many years, nor can I any longer tell one kind of car from another.
When I was a child, cars were more distinctive, and I knew who had manufactured each one, and the car’s name too.
Ours were always Chevrolets because my uncle was a mechanic at a car dealership and he got a discount on cars that were used for test drives.
In my city life, as an adult, I would look out my window and draw the cars parked on the street below in front of the building.
They were often the same cars. Humans are habitual.
That window was on the second floor, so I never worried about falling out.
Now that I live on the eighth floor I can’t see the cars on the street at all.
I see my neighbors’ windows and roofs.
I know who is always up late, and who comes up to the roof to smoke while pacing and talking on their cell phone.
But I don’t know what is parked out front, or if it’s the same car every day.
I don’t draw that much any more either, so I probably wouldn’t be drawing the cars, even if I could see them.
But I’m always taking photos of things on the street when I’m out walking.
And every once in awhile, a car catches my eye.
After all, cars have doors too.
The top car is a photo I got from the internet, which looks exactly like my favorite childhood car–a red Impala with tail fins. They don’t make them like that any more. The other red car is one I saw on the street recently.
The vintage car photos were taken when I happened upon a crew setting up for a movie or TV show filming. There were a few of us taking photos and the crew was not too happy about it so we had to be quick about it and move on.
And the car below is a Pagani photographed years ago when I took the train to Boston to visit my daughter. It was parked right by the train station. Both my daughter and I had to photograph it, along with seemingly everyone that walked by. I’m still wondering why and how it came to be there.
The W3 prompt from Lynn this week is to write a list poem incorporating some form of the word fall. I’m actually not sure this is really a list poem, but I’ve been wanting to put those vintage cars into a post, and, remembering my old car drawings, it worked perfectly. And, as I noted, all cars have doors. Even drawings of cars.
As to the aforementioned doors, there are always lots of them at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.
Tags: #Thursday doors, cars, drawing, list poem, photography, poetry, W3
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I thoroughly enjoyed your post Kerfe. Love the poem and the way you wove your favorite cars new and vintage into the lines of your poem. Great drawings you are an amazing talent! Yes and cars have many doors. Well done!
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Thanks Suzette. I had fun with this one.
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Cars are both personal, but a simple topic. I like the way you weaved the two together. You captured some beautiful vintage cars! 🙂
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Thanks Frank. That green one especially appeals to me.
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I don’t know anything about cars, but I like your memories and photos.
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Thanks Merril. Better looked at than driven I think.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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My grandpa had an Impala with fins like that. Cars of today are pale ghosts in comparison to those back in the (except for the odd sports car affordable only to the mega wealthy.)
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I loved those fins. Thanks Jade.
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Cool car photos and drawings…thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for the prompt!
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This is such a fun post. I like your drawings and the photos. Car doors are some of the best doors to feature. You comment about earlier cars being distinctive is so true. Now, they all look the same.
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Thanks Dan.
They do, sadly. Everything is constructed to be cheap and efficient now, though it doesn’t even live up to the second much of the time.
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I love drawing cars. Yours are wonderful. I remember riding in a Cadillac in the early 1960’s. With fins. Beautiful.
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Thanks Claudia. The fins were the best.
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I love these, Kerfe.
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Thanks Jack. You’re one of the reasons I’m always looking when I’m out and about.
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Thank you, Kerfe! (I’m blushing)
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It’s true.
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I really enjoyed reading this Kerfe, made me smile as you mentioned doors as I was so engrossed I didn’t see it coming…. Had such beautiful movement through the years and changes … wonderful power of observation and talent … 💞
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Thanks Suzanne. Thursday Door leads me to many interesting places.
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I am glad you share it and take me along too ….
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❤️
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It all works. What a fun post. Yep, cars have doors.
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They do! Thanks D.
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Kerfe I loved the perspective of this poem – looking down but not falling! So many great car photos!! ❤
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Thanks Muri. I was lucky to find those vintage cars.
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birds, doors, cars or lists you always write amazing poetry K. Thanks. This was lovely. 😚
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Thanks Selma.
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Hi Kerfe, great car pictures. I love your list poem.
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Thanks Robbie.
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Interesting post Kerfe and I loved all those cars. Awesome and beautiful.
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Thanks Kamal.
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Always welcome dear Kerfe 😊😊🙏
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Thanks for the fun post, Kerfe! I love the vintage cars, and of course I couldn’t resist listening to “The Little Old Lady of Pasadena.”
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Thanks Liz. Those cars were a treat to see. And that song is always worth a listen. There were so many good car songs from that era.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe. Remember this one? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=enqNl7tdLR4
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What a great animation! I do remember it, thanks!.
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My dad got such a kick out of the song. We had a Rambler American when the song came out.
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Perfect!
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Intriguing insights!
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Thanks!
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Wow! Some fab cars here. Your drawings are terrific. Thank you!
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Thanks Resa. Doing Thursday Doors has made me notice all kinds of things when I’m looking for doors.
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I get it! I look for street art. The eyes open!
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They do!
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I’ve never seen or heard of a Pagani. There are two of those Tesla Cybertrucks around where I live. I would love an old car over that!
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I had never heard of a Pagani either. Luckily it was emblazoned on the vehicle!
I have no love for Tesla in any form. I agree, old cars have a lot more style.
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Nicely woven list poem! It felt like a fabulous tour of cars and adventures.
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Thanks!
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Love it! Chris and I love old and specially fun car styles, and leaving New Mexico to come back to Hawaii meant he had to give up an old car he was working on restoring. But glad to be back in Hawaii. 💕
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Thanks Bela. I’ve known many a man who liked to tinker with cars. Hard to do with the computerized ones.
Too hot in New Mexico? My nephew lives in Arizona and he says it’s brutal now. I’m sure the climate is better in Hawaii.
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More than that, it simply was not ‘home’ for us. We have returned with a renewed appreciation for our community here. 😊
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I understand that. Both my daughters left NYC and then came back, happy to be home. I on the other hand miss all the suburban places I lived growing up not one bit.
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Yeah, I totally get that. I grew up in probably some of the first ‘suburbs’ in the mountains of Southern California. It was pretty nice, pretty remote, pretty unique. Now it has simply been gobbled up by too much, too many, too much! it has been over 50 years, all of which have been lived in the country. Including the island here. I am glad your girls are closer! ☺️🌺
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Thanks Bela. Me too.
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Kerfe, your photos of vintage cars are so cool, and as someone who hasn’t owned a car since 2006, I do appreciate how they bring back that distinctive sense of style and nostalgia.
~David
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Thanks David. It was a different world, truly.
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agreed 100%
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hi, Kerfe! 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3—hosted by our wonderful Sarah Whiley for the first time—is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/09/18/w3-prompt-125-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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Thanks David. Sarah’s poem is excellent.
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Indeed❣️
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