I attempt to write a list poem about cars (Thursday Doors)

I have never owned a car.
I have not even driven a car in many years, nor can I any longer tell one kind of car from another.

When I was a child, cars were more distinctive, and I knew who had manufactured each one, and the car’s name too.
Ours were always Chevrolets because my uncle was a mechanic at a car dealership and he got a discount on cars that were used for test drives.

In my city life, as an adult, I would look out my window and draw the cars parked on the street below in front of the building.
They were often the same cars.  Humans are habitual.
That window was on the second floor, so I never worried about falling out.

Now that I live on the eighth floor I can’t see the cars on the street at all.
I see my neighbors’ windows and roofs.
I know who is always up late, and who comes up to the roof to smoke while pacing and talking on their cell phone.
But I don’t know what is parked out front, or if it’s the same car every day.
I don’t draw that much any more either, so I probably wouldn’t be drawing the cars, even if I could see them.

But I’m always taking photos of things on the street when I’m out walking.
And every once in awhile, a car catches my eye.
After all, cars have doors too.

The top car is a photo I got from the internet, which looks exactly like my favorite childhood car–a red Impala with tail fins. They don’t make them like that any more. The other red car is one I saw on the street recently.

The vintage car photos were taken when I happened upon a crew setting up for a movie or TV show filming. There were a few of us taking photos and the crew was not too happy about it so we had to be quick about it and move on.

And the car below is a Pagani photographed years ago when I took the train to Boston to visit my daughter. It was parked right by the train station. Both my daughter and I had to photograph it, along with seemingly everyone that walked by. I’m still wondering why and how it came to be there.

The W3 prompt from Lynn this week is to write a list poem incorporating some form of the word fall. I’m actually not sure this is really a list poem, but I’ve been wanting to put those vintage cars into a post, and, remembering my old car drawings, it worked perfectly. And, as I noted, all cars have doors. Even drawings of cars.

As to the aforementioned doors, there are always lots of them at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.

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62 responses to “I attempt to write a list poem about cars (Thursday Doors)”

  1. Suzette Benjamin's avatar
    Suzette Benjamin says :

    I thoroughly enjoyed your post Kerfe. Love the poem and the way you wove your favorite cars new and vintage into the lines of your poem. Great drawings you are an amazing talent! Yes and cars have many doors. Well done!

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  2. Frank @ Beach Walk Reflections's avatar
    Frank @ Beach Walk Reflections says :

    Cars are both personal, but a simple topic. I like the way you weaved the two together. You captured some beautiful vintage cars! 🙂

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  3. merrildsmith's avatar
    merrildsmith says :

    I don’t know anything about cars, but I like your memories and photos.

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  4. Lisa or Li's avatar
    msjadeli says :

    My grandpa had an Impala with fins like that. Cars of today are pale ghosts in comparison to those back in the (except for the odd sports car affordable only to the mega wealthy.)

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  5. lynn__'s avatar
    lynn__ says :

    Cool car photos and drawings…thanks for sharing!

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  6. Dan Antion's avatar
    Dan Antion says :

    This is such a fun post. I like your drawings and the photos. Car doors are some of the best doors to feature. You comment about earlier cars being distinctive is so true. Now, they all look the same.

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  7. Claudia McGill's avatar
    Claudia McGill says :

    I love drawing cars. Yours are wonderful. I remember riding in a Cadillac in the early 1960’s. With fins. Beautiful.

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  8. brazannemuse's avatar
    brazannemuse says :

    I really enjoyed reading this Kerfe, made me smile as you mentioned doors as I was so engrossed I didn’t see it coming…. Had such beautiful movement through the years and changes … wonderful power of observation and talent … 💞

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  9. D. Avery @shiftnshake's avatar
    D. Avery @shiftnshake says :

    It all works. What a fun post. Yep, cars have doors.

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  10. murisopsis's avatar
    murisopsis says :

    Kerfe I loved the perspective of this poem – looking down but not falling! So many great car photos!! ❤

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  11. SelmaMartin's avatar
    SelmaMartin says :

    birds, doors, cars or lists you always write amazing poetry K. Thanks. This was lovely. 😚

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  12. robertawrites235681907's avatar
    robertawrites235681907 says :

    Hi Kerfe, great car pictures. I love your list poem.

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  13. boundlessblessingsblog's avatar
    boundlessblessingsblog says :

    Interesting post Kerfe and I loved all those cars. Awesome and beautiful.

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  14. Liz Gauffreau's avatar
    Liz Gauffreau says :

    Thanks for the fun post, Kerfe! I love the vintage cars, and of course I couldn’t resist listening to “The Little Old Lady of Pasadena.”

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  15. Dalmatian Insider's avatar
    Dalmatian Insider says :

    Intriguing insights!

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  16. Resa's avatar
    Resa says :

    Wow! Some fab cars here. Your drawings are terrific. Thank you!

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  17. Stine Writing and Miniatures's avatar
    Stine Writing and Miniatures says :

    I’ve never seen or heard of a Pagani. There are two of those Tesla Cybertrucks around where I live. I would love an old car over that!

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  18. wordsandcoffee1's avatar
    wordsandcoffee1 says :

    Nicely woven list poem! It felt like a fabulous tour of cars and adventures.

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  19. Bela Johnson's avatar
    Bela Johnson says :

    Love it! Chris and I love old and specially fun car styles, and leaving New Mexico to come back to Hawaii meant he had to give up an old car he was working on restoring. But glad to be back in Hawaii. 💕

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  20. ben Alexander's avatar
    ben Alexander says :

    Kerfe, your photos of vintage cars are so cool, and as someone who hasn’t owned a car since 2006, I do appreciate how they bring back that distinctive sense of style and nostalgia.

    ~David

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  21. ben Alexander's avatar
    ben Alexander says :

    hi, Kerfe! 👋🏻

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3—hosted by our wonderful Sarah Whiley for the first time—is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/09/18/w3-prompt-125-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

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