Mother Magic (Thursday Doors Writing Challenge)
Once upon a time
in song and in myth
now and forevermore…
My name will be moon.
It will be water and also
moon-shining-on-water
It will be compounded by fire
and air, attached by currents
to the turning of the tides.
It will be wishes-upon-stars,
winged dreams and wild dreams,
spiraling-rivers-of-galaxies
It will be smoke-in-mirrors,
mysterious and distant,
singing spells in whispers.
It will be browns-turning-into-greens,
layers merged into glimmering
transparencies where roots abide.
My name will be the-rock-that-holds-the-sky.
It will be elemental, primordial, endless,
unlimited, immeasurable
I am the Guardian of Creation,
the-wheel-that-keeps-turning–
the doorway into the womb.
When I saw Robbie’s photo, I thought immediately of all the world’s mother goddesses.
For the Thursday Doors Writing Challenge, open for the entire month of May, and hosted by Dan Antion. Anyone can join–you can see all the doors available to inspire you here.
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Beautiful ❤️
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This is simply beautiful, Kerfe. The various connotations of Mother are with us throughout our life. Thanks for joining the challenge. Your words and your artwork tell a wonderful story.
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Thanks Dan. This photo caught my eye right away. Deciding on the next one is going to be difficult.
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Your words are so perfect and fit the photo! I really like this.
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Thanks Merril. Robbie’s photo caught my eye right away.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe. It’s a good one.
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Fabulous! 💓
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Thanks Ashley.
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I love your collages!
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Thanks Liz!
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You’re welcome, Kerfe!
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That is simply lovely! 💗
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Thanks Teresa–Robbie’s photo is inspiring.
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Hi, Kerfe. I had the same thought about Robbie’s photo — although I could not have expressed it so beautifully. I love the artwork too.
A little while ago I sent an email (on a different topic) to your gmail address from inside my blog. I didn’t know what I should use.
Happy May. Hugs.
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Thanks Teagan. It’s a great photo.
That email is fine, and I’ve replied.
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Kerfe this one stirs the imagination!! Robbie’s photo is intriguing and a great jumping off point for your poem!
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Thanks Muri. Robbie’s photo is inspiring.
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Beautiful well shared 💐
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Thanks!
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😊🖐️
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As always, your wordcraft amazes me — “attached by currents/ to the turning of the tides,” “glimmering/ transparencies where roots abide,” for instance. There is so much in this that expresses pregnancy and birthing. It’s almost explosive. With a mysterious tension. Yes, motherness. Especially in combination with the collages, a lovely transcription of Robbie’s photo.
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Thanks Maureen. Where would we be without our mothers?
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I like all the names of the Guardian. Earth Mother – who gives blessings, especially when we are still enough to listen.
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Thanks Jules. The Great Mother is always a comfort to me.
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Hi Kerfe, I am delighted my photograph inspired this amazing poem. Thank you.
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Thanks to you for the wonderful photo.
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What a special poem honoring Mother Earth and these graphics and photo by Robbie are amazing, Kerfe!
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Thanks Cindy. Robbie’s photo caught my attention right away.
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🩷🩷🩷
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Beautiful rhythm to your poem Kerfe
I like the movement of water your imagery presents. Your door selection for your well penned strophes to Mother Earth of legends, superb.
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Thanks Suzette.
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My name will be moon.
It will be water and also
moon-shining-on-water – best lines I’ve read all day (and I’ve been pottering around substack and WP for hours).
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Thanks Rajani–that gave me a lift.
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A beautiful tribute to the power of the feminine, Kerfe. I loved this, and it’s a perfect fit for Robbie’s image.
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Thanks Diana. Robbie has a good eye.
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Perfect and superb artwork. Wonderful poem Kerfe 🙏❤️😊
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Thanks Kamal.
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Always welcome Kerfe 😊🙏😊
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Beautifully poem, Kerfe! I can see how Robbie’s door was such an inspiration. Your collages is lovely!
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Thanks Miriam. That door was made for me.
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What a terrific poem for Robbie’s door pic. Thank you!
It was a fun challenge this year!
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It was, thanks Resa. Too many doors, not enough time…
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Agree!
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Deep and moving poem, Kerfe! Robbie’s photo is certainly inspiring. 🙂
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Thanks Brenda. Yes it is.
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