Maintenance (Thursday Doors)
Curiosity never seems to need repairs—
not like cars, or careers, which always do.
And who could fix surprise? Who would try?
A therapist often needs to be discarded–
and also, frequently, those rainy afternoons
that stretch endlessly into artificial lists
strewn with folly-filled patterns and pauses
that have no destination, only questions—
And then consider buildings, houses–
which seems perpetually to require repair—
doors, windows, roof, floors, walls—call the plumber!
But it is far more difficult to mend a home.
The thread that holds a home together
is fragile—it needs constant attention,
or it will fray, lose its connection—
searching for an open hand, a kind heart.
A few weeks ago I talked about all the scaffolding on the streets of NYC. I decided yesterday to record some of them I passed while walking to and from the grocery store. The top door is from a building where the scaffolding has just come down. The ground floor has been completely renovated by a photography and printing business, and they are just putting the finishing touches on the interior.
One of the local schools is having exterior work done–part of the playground is closed off by fences, gates, and scaffolding. And the apartment building across the street also seems to be having extensive work done, as part of the street is closed off.
Some scaffolds and buildings are large, some small. Some cover the entire building, some just the ground floor.
This sculpture garden is new–it’s on the crosswalk between traffic and the bike lane on Amsterdam Avenue.
Apple Bank has been scaffolded for awhile, but I think I have some photos of it from before, which I will try to find. It has some great doors. There are apartments in the upper floors.
This building on Broadway has some restaurants on the ground floor. The scaffolding makes it easy to eat outside even if it rains.
Two more scaffolds I passed on my way home.
Kim’s W3 prompt this week was to write a poem and then revise it after plugging it into the N+7 Surrealist Poetry Generator. About half the nouns in my original poem were evidently not in its dictionary, so I didn’t get that many new words to work with. I consulted the thesaurus and managed to come up with enough nouns to satisfy its constraints.
All my writing is endlessly revised, up to and even past the point I press “post”. In this case, the first stanza owes more to the N+7 suggestions than the second, but both stanzas are pretty much unrecognizable from what I originally wrote.
And of course the poem itself is only peripherally connected to this week’s doors. But if you try hard enough to see it they have a kind of relationship.
Don’t forget to check out all the doors at Thursday Doors, hosted by Dan Antion.
And I can never get enough Bonnie Raitt.








Thank you K – what a brilliant exploration of the N+7 process! Your poem beautifully captures how some things persist while others need constant tending. The metaphor of homes held together by fragile threads is stunning, and your final lines about searching for connection are deeply moving.
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Thanks Bob. I wanted to continue the idea of home. It’s something I think about a lot.
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I would like to read your original poems, Kerfe. Well done to you for attempting this prompt. I like the interesting buildings you shared.
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Thanks Robbie. When I tried it with an actual poem, it didn’t work for me at all, so I started with words, ideas, and phrases–I don’t really have an original poem for this. And I kept revising it on the computer so I don’t even have a record of the stages it went though. Which is true of a lot of what I write.
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What a spectacular poem! I have not tried to write for this prompt. The closing stanza is stunningly beautiful.
I love how I get to tour NY from my home.
And of course, love Bonnie Raitt.
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Thanks Punam. The poems I’ve read so far have used many different approaches to the prompt. The flexibility is good I think.
There is always more to see around here–change is the basic state of things.
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You are welcome, Kerfe. I finally did try the prompt. The trick as Kim had advised, is to use lits of nouns.
I was in New York for a couple of days way back in the late nineties and loved what little I could explore. Not too many scaffoldings then, I remember.
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That may have been before Local Law 11 went into effect . Every 5 years, buildings now have to inspect and repair their facades and roofs. Since it takes at least a year to do the work, there are always scaffolds everywhere! (K)
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A thoughtful and thought-provoking poem. I’m also fascinated by scaffolding, particularly the bamboo kind a lot of Asian countries use (in fact, I just sold a picture book manuscript that started out as an ode to bamboo scaffolding!).
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Thanks Teresa.
I’ll have to look up bamboo scaffolding. There is not much thought put into the aesthetics of most of these.
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Love the poem and Bonnie Raitt. This track is one of my favourites….:). Also your photographs of scaffolding superb….what a post. So much food for thought….xx
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Thanks Janet. Structure always makes for interesting photos I find.
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As does a beautiful EYE….xx
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I haven’t been to NYC in a few years but if I remember correctly, it was maybe two or three years in a row that I walked under a considerable amount of scaffolding shortly after coming up from the trains.
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It’s everywhere, for sure.
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I love your poem! It’s right on target.
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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The N+7 sounds like fun. Well done, Kerfe. I enjoyed your views of the city. I’m always stunned at how beautiful the buildings are.
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Thanks Colleen. N+7 is an interesting exercise, but not really anything I’d use on my own to create a poem. The collage box oracle is much better at creating strange juxtapositions of words and phrases that make you think.
I’m lucky to live in an area that hasn’t been completely demolished for tall glass box buildings.
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I love that poem, Kerfe. I’ve spent a lot of time making home repairs of every sort. I’ve also seen the scaffolding in New York from across the street and underneath. Thanks for the tour and the explanations.
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Thanks Dan. I’ve only lived in houses briefly as an adult, and there is always something that needs fixing. Not that our apartment building is much different…
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If it doesn’t need to be fixed, it needs to be maintained to avoid having to fix it later.
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Makes me think homes too need periods of scaffolding and cover to make sure the repairs happen as they should and all is well again… bold signs of endurance and nurture! I do like the garden in the middle of the busy streets…
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I think that’s a good conclusion to draw Rajani. Sometimes you need to keep the outside world at bay.
Yes, that garden was a lovely surprise.
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Your poem and post reminded me of Seamus Heaney’s Scaffolding. Here it is, lifted from poets.org:
Masons, when they start upon a building,
Are careful to test out the scaffolding;
Make sure that planks won’t slip at busy points,
Secure all ladders, tighten bolted joints.
And yet all this comes down when the job’s done
Showing off walls of sure and solid stone.
So if, my dear, there sometimes seem to be
Old bridges breaking between you and me
Never fear. We may let the scaffolds fall
Confident that we have built our wall.
“Scaffolding” from Opened Ground: Selected Poems 1966–1996 by Seamus Heaney. Copyright © 1998 by Seamus Heaney.
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Oh, that’s excellent D. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for fully joining in on my prompt. I use n+7 occasionally as a tool.
The prom you have produced is excellent and just slightly strange. I love it!
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Ah – autocorrect just messed up . Poem not prom. 😵💫
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I’m continually amazed by its decisions.
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Thanks Kim. Slightly strange–I think that’s the goal with a tool like this.
My best surrealist tool is cutting words and phrases out of books and magazines–I don’t throw them up in the air, but by spilling some of them out on a table I come up with plenty of strange thoughts and juxtapositions to use on my often surrealist postcards. Erasure poems are good for that too.
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I struggle to ‘see’ erasure poems in a prose text. But I will try out your cutting’s idea!
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I think you will enjoy it–let me know.
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Will do!
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Seriously — “Who could fix surprise? Who would try?”
There’s something very eecummings-esque about
“those rainy afternoons
that stretch endlessly into artificial lists
strewn with folly-filled patterns and pauses
that have no destination, only questions”
I love your poem. I’m so impressed with what you got out of the exercise!
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Thanks Sally. It required a flexible approach for sure.
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Your poem is brilliant. And I love your photos. I think a collection of scaffolding poems should be published. Here’s a quote from David’s amazing poem from last week,
“My work is real,
my meaning deep,
but I feel its scaffolding rattle
with each bill.”
Maybe an idea one can build on? 😁🤗
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Thanks Lesley. You’re right–the idea of a scaffold has many manifestations.
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I am drawn to your poem. The line about the threads that hold a home together is stunning. It is such a delicate balance.
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It is. Thanks Violet.
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This was an unexpected topic, Kerfe. Your poem is lovely. I enjoyed seeing the work in progress.
Thanks for the video. I don’t know how I wasn’t acquainted with her in years past (I at least knew the name), but I’ve become a Bonnie Raitt fan. I hadn’t heard this one.
By the way, I’m using your “3 random reader things” in this weekend’s episode of my blog serial. Hugs.
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Thanks Teagan! I look forward to reading it.
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Kerfe, I love how you have worked this prompt and built a poem that to me, feels full of exploration … 💞Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne.
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Our structures are in a constant state of needing repairs, but the most important thing is the relationships within. Wonderful poem! I do find scaffolding intriguing. 🙂
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Thanks Brenda. I agree with that sentiment.
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What a great post and wk fertility poem.. oh for the endless Restructurings in all of life and home repairs .
Great shots and those scaffoldings always drive me cra cra when I visit N Kerf 🩷
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Thanks Cindy. The scaffolding drives New Yorkers crazy too (except when it’s raining).
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Ha ha.. that makes sense!!! 💓
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Lovely poem! On my visits to NYC, I definitely recall all of the scaffolding. We live in the rural Midwest, so the city already feels very claustrophobic to me, and the scaffolding everywhere only enhanced that feeling. I like how you pointed out an advantage of it, like having a shelter in the rain.
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Thanks Sarah. There are definitely more scaffolds now than when I moved to New York 55 years ago. I just find it unsightly, though I can see how it could add to the claustrophobic feeling.
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Love that central photo with the driftwood structure and all the plants in the middle – gorgeous!
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It was a wonderful surprise to encounter it.
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Kerfe I love the scaffolding photos with the doors – and your poem is lovely and makes so much more sense than mine!!
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Thanks Muri. I should have perhaps tried to be more nonsensical I think.
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Seems a fine line that is hard to walk! Perhaps I’ll try again – maybe or maybe not….
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I like the thought that curiosity never needs repairs and then the difference between a house and a home.
So many scaffoldings!
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enjoyed your post so much and the opening two stanzas had so much psychology
each diverse in the wisdom layered in – the first had a lot to ponder – with “questions and just this presence in life vibe – as it all opened with “Curiosity never seems to need repairs…” and then the second stanza got more to the theme in the post – still a bit layered and rich. Also, that is a lot of scaffolding and seems like a never ending occurrence for such a beautiful city with so many older structures.
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Thanks so much Yvette. And you are right–it’s never ending.
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Also, the closing Bonnie Rait song reminded me of how Rait shared her success came just from doing music – and how she felt successful long before financial rewards came her way-
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She is a treasure.
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🙂🙂
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The sculpture garden is really cool. I like this part a lot:
The thread that holds a home together
is fragile—it needs constant attention,
or it will fray, lose its connection—
searching for an open hand, a kind heart.
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Thanks Melissa. Paying attention to each other is key. It’s not something I’ve always done and I regret it.
It really was a wonderful surprise to find a garden in the middle of an intersection.
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hi, Kerfe 😍
Just wanna let you know that this week’s touching W3 prompt, hosted by our wonderful Sheila Bair, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
P.S. I’m sorry I hadn’t commented on this post before – there’s been a lot going on in my corner of the world of late…
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Thanks David–yes there is. No need to apologize.
I hope to get to it, but I can’t seem to get anything done these days myself. Time shrinks, my lists grow ever longer…
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I feel you 💞
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Lately it has been the sprinklers in our yard that are requiring a lot of repair… it would be a lot easier if they weren’t buried under all that grass! Such interesting scaffolding everywhere around you…. I enjoyed your poem 😊
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Thanks Jill. Lawns are a lot of work! It was a part of my childhood chores that I did not enjoy. But at least we were outside…
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Yes, I do like being outside too! 😊
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